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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5887 days Last activity: 5152 days |
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EDIT: Story Deleted (Last edited by Makura on 07-12-08 11:51 PM) |
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Pockets Werewolf pockets Since: 10-20-04 Since last post: 5090 days Last activity: 4607 days |
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Very nice. I like. Good use of imagery, good use of control and submission.
Very good, baby. |
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FX Zombie Marco Since: 03-24-06 Since last post: 3830 days Last activity: 3725 days |
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That was very good. I really liked the ending. Of course, if he lived there (which the ending pretty much implies) isn't it kinda lying to the reader when you say that he had only been there once? | |||
Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 100 days Last activity: 100 days |
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Judges results, each area out of 10 points:
Originally posted by venomouslobster Originally posted by Elara Zabuza could not get around to reading this story, so no results from him. |
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GuardianOni Shaman Since: 09-07-04 From: The dark path Since last post: 5840 days Last activity: 5299 days |
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Congratulations Makura. *Shakes hand, and gives a hug* | |||
Pockets Werewolf pockets Since: 10-20-04 Since last post: 5090 days Last activity: 4607 days |
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FX, the ending of the story does not imply that he lives there. Simply he stayed
the night and took a shower in the morning before she woke up. Since it was stated that he'd never been in the house before that clarify's that he doesn't live there. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5887 days Last activity: 5152 days |
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Surprising. Thanks for all the comments.
FX, the story never implies that he lives there, that's the idea of it. |
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