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Savedox

Berserker
You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy!








Since: 08-20-04
From: Read \"Real Name\"

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Posted on 09-20-05 08:53 PM Link | Quote
I can see you and Im afraid that you have already rescued me.... So yea....

*hugs*
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-20-05 08:58 PM Link | Quote
*uber huggles*

Here is my new one.

Can you find the hidden message?

Ghastly is this empty form
Under imitated thought and hope
Against all pain that wraps your heart
Regardless of how it turns on me
Desperate to do what makes me feel whole
I will protect you
And it will be my only solace
Never seize until you’re free

And even in the darkest times
Nothing will barricade my path
Ghastly was this empty form, until I heard the truth
Enter what is left of my soul
Label me, Guardian Angel
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 09-20-05 11:03 PM Link | Quote
Aww, that is cute. And very true as well... though I think you have more of your soul left than you let on.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-22-05 10:44 PM Link | Quote
left of my soul has two meanings..for some reason I wanted to put heart but it didn't flow, so what's left of my soul would be my heart *shrugs*
Savedox

Berserker
You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy!








Since: 08-20-04
From: Read \"Real Name\"

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Posted on 09-22-05 10:52 PM Link | Quote
I see the secret message... XD... hahaha if you cant your funny lol...

*hugs makura* can I be your Guardian Angel.....?
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-24-05 12:26 AM Link | Quote
*huggles* Of course you can, honey.

New poem coming soon, I need to type the damn thing.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 74 days
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Posted on 09-24-05 06:13 PM Link | Quote
*filler kitty walks by*

Well, get to writing then, damn you!

I figured much on the soul/heart thing, and my comment still stands.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-25-05 03:25 PM Link | Quote
Words cannot describe
and that's the beauty of it.
This marvelous feeling I feel inside
grows increasingly stronger every minute.

What we share we definitely can't explain.
I know of no way to tell you,
and that's okay.
I know you feel what I do too.

It's absolutely unique to you and I
and is left better unsaid.
The only reason why
is because our love says it over and over again.

The task of articulation, is one too tough.
Words just can't decribe.
Even though they're not good enough
it's nice to know they tried.
Savedox

Berserker
You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy!








Since: 08-20-04
From: Read \"Real Name\"

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Posted on 09-25-05 03:28 PM Link | Quote
I think that this one is great, keep them comeing...

*hugs*
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-26-05 02:57 AM Link | Quote
I'm so glad you like it, love.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 74 days
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Posted on 09-27-05 02:43 AM Link | Quote
MORE!!! I know you have more, post!!
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5649 days
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Posted on 11-13-05 07:37 PM Link | Quote


The, not yet, new me.

New Heart.
New Faith.
New Love.
New Grace.

I have started over.

My Existence never mattered.
Not a Ripple in the water.
Not a Trace of movement in the sand.

Until the day I held You.
Hand intertwined in Hand.
Vivid is the Image in my head.

Soul warm Body too
Eyes fixed,
Locked on You

Impossibly close, I draw nearer.
Breath hot Nervous gasps.
Not loud enough to reveal my Fear.

Then You too draw nearer.
A Spark is lit. We’re touching Lips.
And then I open my eyes.
Darkness.

I whisper to myself.
That day is Soon to come.

Until Then.

No Heart.
No Faith.
No Love.
No Grace.

I can’t start over yet.

My Existence never mattered.
Not a Ripple in the water.
Not a Trace of movement in the sand.

Don’t fret, Love.
You give me hope. And that’s more than I’ll ever need.
caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 01-07-06 02:36 PM Link | Quote
I like both of your poems. Actually, I always like your work. They are always so beautiful, and there are times when I believe that darkness, with all its' secrets, is more beautiful than the sometimes harsh planes of light.
You have an incredible talent, not many can put thought and emotion into words, let alone make it beautiful.

You have my respect. And for that, I would bow to you.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 74 days
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Posted on 01-08-06 01:42 AM Link | Quote
Aww, it is the cuteness! I like that last one.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5649 days
Last activity: 4914 days
Posted on 01-20-06 04:04 PM Link | Quote
I question who I am

Question if I ever knew
Under everything I seem to be
Everything is so confused
Searching myself gets me nowhere
Time goes on, and still, nothing
I only have these broken thoughts
Oblivious to things most obvious
Novice to my own sad life

Wandering, wondering if certainty is near
Hope is my only solace
On the journey of self discovery

I question who I am

And perhaps I’ll never know
My journey is never-ending

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The Music isn’t loud enough
It doesn’t blast away my pain
Just make everything go away
Pulse into my veins
Find it’s way poked through flesh
Just make everything go away
Now.
Just make it Stop.
Just make everything go away
I bite my tongue until bleeds
In my fists my heart beats
Just make everything go away
I’m tired
I want to sleep
Just make everything go away
I want to get high
I want to cut myself
Just make everything go away
I'll Sleep until the world has died
I want to be alone
Just make everything go away
Now
Please
Just make everything go away
Take it away, I don’t care
I’m not going anywhere


I'm retarded. Secret Message in the first. Find it. comment. Bye


(Last edited by Makura on 01-20-06 07:15 PM)
Cairoi
This isn't about you and your loud mouth,
This is about me and my fucking beard.








Since: 08-29-04
From: PA

Since last post: 4610 days
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Posted on 01-21-06 04:01 PM Link | Quote
Hmm. You do the same thing I do in some of my school-based poems to freak with their minds.

"I question who I am" First letter in every line.

Hmm? Self-discovery is important. I hope you find the answer.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 74 days
Last activity: 74 days
Posted on 01-22-06 01:39 AM Link | Quote
*huggles*

You'll be questioning things for a long while more... I still am on many things. But you'll make it... just no more cutting, please.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 01-22-06 02:05 AM Link | Quote
I promise, no more. And my Questioning poem was a school assignment.
Broken Dreams

Thief








Since: 05-29-05
From: California

Since last post: 6388 days
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Posted on 01-24-06 03:06 AM Link | Quote
damn girl you are truly kick ass, not only is your realy life name like mine, we have the same taste of music in everything, and I just want you to know, even if we dont know eachother in real life, I think from how you express yourself, your an awesome person and make lovely poems.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5649 days
Last activity: 4914 days
Posted on 01-24-06 10:11 AM Link | Quote
Thanks. I'm glad you like them. And you're right, we do have a lot in common.
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