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Savedox Berserker You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy!          Since: 08-20-04 From: Read \"Real Name\" Since last post: 4547 days Last activity: 1636 days |
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| I can see you and Im afraid that you have already rescued me.... So yea....
*hugs* |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| *uber huggles*
Here is my new one. Can you find the hidden message? Ghastly is this empty form Under imitated thought and hope Against all pain that wraps your heart Regardless of how it turns on me Desperate to do what makes me feel whole I will protect you And it will be my only solace Never seize until you’re free And even in the darkest times Nothing will barricade my path Ghastly was this empty form, until I heard the truth Enter what is left of my soul Label me, Guardian Angel |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 103 days Last activity: 103 days |
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| Aww, that is cute. And very true as well... though I think you have more of your soul left than you let on. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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left of my soul has two meanings..for some reason I wanted to put heart but it didn't flow, so what's left of my soul would be my heart *shrugs*  |
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Savedox Berserker You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy! Since: 08-20-04 From: Read \"Real Name\" Since last post: 4547 days Last activity: 1636 days |
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| I see the secret message... XD... hahaha if you cant your funny lol...
*hugs makura* can I be your Guardian Angel.....? |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| *huggles* Of course you can, honey.
New poem coming soon, I need to type the damn thing. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 103 days Last activity: 103 days |
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| *filler kitty walks by*
Well, get to writing then, damn you! I figured much on the soul/heart thing, and my comment still stands. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| Words cannot describe
and that's the beauty of it. This marvelous feeling I feel inside grows increasingly stronger every minute. What we share we definitely can't explain. I know of no way to tell you, and that's okay. I know you feel what I do too. It's absolutely unique to you and I and is left better unsaid. The only reason why is because our love says it over and over again. The task of articulation, is one too tough. Words just can't decribe. Even though they're not good enough it's nice to know they tried. |
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Savedox Berserker You put a bullet in my head, Till black turns to red! This could all end in tragedy! Since: 08-20-04 From: Read \"Real Name\" Since last post: 4547 days Last activity: 1636 days |
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| I think that this one is great, keep them comeing...
*hugs* |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| I'm so glad you like it, love. | |||
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 103 days Last activity: 103 days |
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| MORE!!! I know you have more, post!! | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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The, not yet, new me. New Heart. New Faith. New Love. New Grace. I have started over. My Existence never mattered. Not a Ripple in the water. Not a Trace of movement in the sand. Until the day I held You. Hand intertwined in Hand. Vivid is the Image in my head. Soul warm Body too Eyes fixed, Locked on You Impossibly close, I draw nearer. Breath hot Nervous gasps. Not loud enough to reveal my Fear. Then You too draw nearer. A Spark is lit. We’re touching Lips. And then I open my eyes. Darkness. I whisper to myself. That day is Soon to come. Until Then. No Heart. No Faith. No Love. No Grace. I can’t start over yet. My Existence never mattered. Not a Ripple in the water. Not a Trace of movement in the sand. Don’t fret, Love. You give me hope. And that’s more than I’ll ever need. |
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caxama Archer  Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6663 days Last activity: 6276 days |
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| I like both of your poems. Actually, I always like your work. They are always so beautiful, and there are times when I believe that darkness, with all its' secrets, is more beautiful than the sometimes harsh planes of light.
You have an incredible talent, not many can put thought and emotion into words, let alone make it beautiful. You have my respect. And for that, I would bow to you. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 103 days Last activity: 103 days |
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| Aww, it is the cuteness! I like that last one. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| I question who I am
Question if I ever knew Under everything I seem to be Everything is so confused Searching myself gets me nowhere Time goes on, and still, nothing I only have these broken thoughts Oblivious to things most obvious Novice to my own sad life Wandering, wondering if certainty is near Hope is my only solace On the journey of self discovery I question who I am And perhaps I’ll never know My journey is never-ending ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The Music isn’t loud enough It doesn’t blast away my pain Just make everything go away Pulse into my veins Find it’s way poked through flesh Just make everything go away Now. Just make it Stop. Just make everything go away I bite my tongue until bleeds In my fists my heart beats Just make everything go away I’m tired I want to sleep Just make everything go away I want to get high I want to cut myself Just make everything go away I'll Sleep until the world has died I want to be alone Just make everything go away Now Please Just make everything go away Take it away, I don’t care I’m not going anywhere I'm retarded. Secret Message in the first. Find it. comment. Bye (Last edited by Makura on 01-20-06 07:15 PM) |
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Cairoi This isn't about you and your loud mouth, This is about me and my fucking beard. Since: 08-29-04 From: PA Since last post: 4851 days Last activity: 4475 days |
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| Hmm. You do the same thing I do in some of my school-based poems to freak with their minds.
"I question who I am" First letter in every line. Hmm? Self-discovery is important. I hope you find the answer. |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 103 days Last activity: 103 days |
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| *huggles*
You'll be questioning things for a long while more... I still am on many things. But you'll make it... just no more cutting, please. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| I promise, no more. And my Questioning poem was a school assignment. | |||
Broken Dreams Thief  Since: 05-29-05 From: California Since last post: 6629 days Last activity: 6629 days |
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| damn girl you are truly kick ass, not only is your realy life name like mine, we have the same taste of music in everything, and I just want you to know, even if we dont know eachother in real life, I think from how you express yourself, your an awesome person and make lovely poems. | |||
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5890 days Last activity: 5155 days |
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| Thanks. I'm glad you like them. And you're right, we do have a lot in common. |
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