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True Flight The One         Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 452 days Last activity: 452 days |
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Wow it's been awhile since I posted an improv poem just from thought on here.  I might be rusty.
As I write this letter, My hands freeze, I can't feel this one pen in my hand, But I know it's there, And in my mind... my mind... It's cold, It's freezing, Only because I'm alone. Dark, dark, dark, Just as the pen dropped from my hands, I warm them by blowing on them, Nothing helps, I still freeze, I'm still cold. I'm just cold. Each part of my body begins to freeze over. I put my hand on my face, I can't feel it.. Just like a cadaver's hand, It's cold, Wrinkled, And lifeless, Just dark, dark dark dark O_o woah... I tried a rhythm thing out please comment, I was going to try something that would mess everyone up. |
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Evo Red Super Koopa Watching you fall brings joy to my heart....  Since: 08-16-04 From: Oregon Since last post: 6461 days Last activity: 6402 days |
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 I like it. I like it cause it's different, and it doesn't make too much sense. LoL, I think things/poetry where I don't know exactly what's going on. |
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Broken Dreams Thief  Since: 05-29-05 From: California Since last post: 6978 days Last activity: 6978 days |
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| your poem doesn't rhythm , but poems don't have to rhythm to rhythm , poems are an express of feelings. I think its ok. (Last edited by Broken Dreams on 09-15-05 09:54 AM) |
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Evo Red Super Koopa Watching you fall brings joy to my heart.... Since: 08-16-04 From: Oregon Since last post: 6461 days Last activity: 6402 days |
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| Maybe it has rhythm the way she was saying it to herself. I am horrible at finding rhythm myself. | |||
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 452 days Last activity: 452 days |
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yeah... it's spoken poetry to me. XD It does confuse me too now.  |
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