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Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 05-17-05 07:19 AM Link | Quote
I figured since I write so much poetry that I should just post the ones that aren't total shit. I'm not going to post any of my past poetry but anything that I write from now on, that isn't total shit, I'll post.

Here's one I wrote last night. (It needs a title I'm open for suggestions.)

A heart's first beat
Love that let's you fly
Truly an awesome feat
Feels so good to cry

Fear is present
Sinking into the core
Never been so pleasant
Never hurt so good before

Can't wait to feel the pain
To be so far gone
As long as you remain
Torture is undone

Elara

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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 05-17-05 06:34 PM Link | Quote
Hmn... it's hard to come up with a title for this one. I like it though... it's one of those "aww, how cute!" things.

If all else fails you could go with 'Torture undone'
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 05-18-05 07:33 AM Link | Quote
Yeah, that'll work. I wanted to make it one of those, "Aww.. How cute things without losing my slightly dark touch."

Torture Undone.. I like it.

I need filler!



(Last edited by Makura on 05-18-05 05:55 PM)
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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 05-21-05 02:18 PM Link | Quote
Yay, I am useful!

Heh heh, filler kitty at your service, ma'am! *bows*
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 05-22-05 06:22 PM Link | Quote
This is kind of an old one, but it is one of my favorites.

I'm content here with our nothingness.

My candle burns,
in this room of mine.
It gives me comfort,
peace of mind.

Downstairs, not fifty feet away,
in the fireplace roar your oh so awesome flames.
I'm jealous, I must admit.
Suddenly my little candle looks so pathetic.

There you go again,had to do me one better.
When will this end?
Our competition has to stop.

And to think, you want us to be child and parent,
instead of criminal and cop.

I'm content here with our nothingness.

When you invite me down to enjoy your fire
I shake my head and, to myself, I confess,
I like my little candle,
in my little darkened room.

In this world of lonsome bliss
I'm content here with our nothingness.



____________________________________________________________________
And, this one is how I feel as of late.

Save Me

I don't know how I feel
can't express my emotion
I don't know if this is real
Don't have the slightest notion
These wounds will never heal

I can't breathe
The air is too much of a fight
I can't see
Too blinded by the light
Too burdened by the grief

I need your help, your aid
Please find my soul
It I will trade
This life I must control
My life I must save.




(Last edited by Makura on 05-22-05 11:05 PM)
Elara

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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 05-22-05 08:41 PM Link | Quote
Mrow? Interesting. I really like those two.
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Since: 09-05-04
From: His Laughin' Place

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Posted on 05-24-05 12:26 PM Link | Quote
Usually un-titles poems should just be titles 'un-titled'

Im a poet myself and makura, thats great writing from the heart, i feel ya man!

maybe i should share my poetry on here.....
Clathana

Magician








Since: 05-15-05
From: In the kitchen eating all the food!!!!!!!!MMM YUMMY!

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Posted on 05-24-05 02:01 PM Link | Quote
Wow good poems Makura I like the 2nd one the best but the 1st one is also good.I don't really like to right poems but sometimes i create my own little stories or something lol
Angel of Deceit

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Since: 04-15-05
From: I thought you knew thats why I asked.

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Posted on 05-27-05 06:13 PM Link | Quote
Those are some good poems Makura. You're really good at writing them. Dang I should have goten you to help me right some for my Literature class...maybe i could have goten a higher grade. XD
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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 05-27-05 07:07 PM Link | Quote
But that would be cheating... and that's bad. Heh heh. I've discovered a way to post Ashes of Envy at last I think, so time for a payback with the filler posts and comments.
caxama

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Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

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Posted on 07-12-05 12:11 PM Link | Quote
The poems are really great, you have such talent. I really like the last one.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 07-22-05 10:33 AM Link | Quote
forever caught in it all

from a top a building

floating in an angry fall

now I'm giving in to what I never felt before

next will be my time

never felt so alive in a time so short

feels so wonderful, like a dream

falling and falling and falling

force pushed me over, it was mean

now I say in my last mortal musing

numbness was no way to live

next, I go, to my choosing

feel while you live , you won't regret it

forget my example

for it took death for me to get life's gift


Dreamland


My dreams are neverending. Memories that haunt my ever so innocent sleep. You see, they aren't dreams at all. But, tortursome recallections.


You must have assumed, dreamland was a place of fantastic wonders. For most people that may be true. It is for most what I wish it was for me. A glowing field of rainbows. Birds singing whole heartedly, with glee. Fairies fluttering about a vast magical forrest. A place where even the wolves are amongst the kindest of creatures.


But my version...


Booming thunder. Tiny spherical tears of rain fall. Monstrous sized screens all around me. All playing out different scenes. Recognized to be the hell that was once my life. On one screen a fight, a hand drawing back prepared to strike. On another, a familiar terrored face..my brother.


I have hope of living happily ever after, even if not activiley involved. One day dreams, although still neverending, will be pleasant and dreamland will be forever happily pretending.













(Last edited by Makura on 08-01-05 09:08 PM)
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Since: 11-15-04

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Posted on 08-01-05 06:16 PM Link | Quote
And you were worried about posting Total shit...Shame on you...

You are a really interesting person Makura....
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 08-30-05 11:12 PM Link | Quote
This is for all of my friends and family:

For all the times...

For all the times you said I love you
and showed how much you care
For all the times you held me close
when life did not seem fair
For all the times you gave me support
and especially your love

For all of the above I値l make you proud for years to come

I値l grow up wise and strong
I値l value integrity
I値l admit when I知 wrong

Most of all I値l remember what you taught me
and the mark it left on my life

For all of the above
I give you appreciation and endless love
Even that is not enough
Elara

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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 09-08-05 12:01 AM Link | Quote
Aww, that is so sweet!! Almost uncharacteristic of you, but very touching.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-08-05 12:43 AM Link | Quote
Thanks.You'll like this one.

Hurt me where my soul won't feel.
Cut me where I'm already scarred.
Bite me where I won't bleed.
Weaken a place that it strong.

Trust me this is what I need.

Hurt me where my soul won't feel it.
Cut me where I'm already scarred.
Bite me where I won't bleed.
Weaken a place that it strong.

Take me back to the person I used to be.
Elara

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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 09-08-05 01:22 AM Link | Quote
Nice, I identify with that one fairly well actually. And I really like the flow you created with the rhyming fifth lines!
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-08-05 08:18 PM Link | Quote
Thank's I'm glad you liked it.
Elara

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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 09-09-05 12:19 AM Link | Quote
It calls to the masochist in me I guess. And looky, now I've made it possible for you to write more. Tee hee!
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

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Posted on 09-13-05 02:16 AM Link | Quote
Can you see me?
See through this opaque act I put them through?
Can you see me?
I think you do.
Can you see me?
I'm trying to let you.

I came clean.
About loving you.
I came clean.
I told the truth.

Bring me to rescue.

You see me.
I know you do.

What kills me.
Is I see you too.

Are you afraid I'll rescue you?
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