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Broken Dreams

Thief








Since: 05-29-05
From: California

Since last post: 6625 days
Last activity: 6625 days
Posted on 08-17-05 12:38 AM Link | Quote
The Candy Shop

There once was two little boys walking in a candy shop together
looking for just the right lolipop
well the oldest boy find a unique lolipop like no other
he felt like he found a real lolipop that no one could take
well the other boy looked around and when he stopped to see what his friend
had he wished he could of gotten to the lolipop first bu accepted and was happy
for his friend. Well his older boy still looked around he was geting greedy
he saw some othere tasty lolipops as he set the unique lolipop on the table he
walked away from it forgeting that there would not be like no other lolipop
like it's self. his younger friend picked up the lolipop happy with it seeing
that his other friend didn't seem to pay attention to weather he had the lolipop or not
well as the young boy enjoyed holding this lolipop the older boy turns to see
that his younger friend had it which made him very jealous and angry
he then goes to his younger friend asking him what he was doing with his lolipop the
younger boy responded saying that the older boy doesn't own the lolipop
so there for it isn't his. the younger boy looks at the shop keeper asking him to buy the lolipop
the older boy started thorwing fits and started crying to get his friends attention
even when the little boy wanted the lolipop he knew his friend spot it first
so there for he felt he was being selfish and unkind he hands the older boy
the lolipop. The older boy thorws the lolipop on the ground shardering it to pieces
the lolipop was no longer a lolipop just broken pieces on the floor.
The shop keeper was mad at the older boy for being just a spoiled brat.
the younger boy didn't know how to feel.
the lolipop was sweeped up into a pile and thorwn away
for ever dissapearing, and that is why it will be the only lolipop
anyone has ever seen.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 99 days
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Posted on 08-19-05 02:11 AM Link | Quote
Interesting. I'd personally bitch slap the first boy for shattering such a unique lollipop. Candy abuse!
WhiteRose

Warrior
Sailor Delerium

Have you ever spent days and days and days making up flavors of ice cream that no ones ever eaten before? Like chicken and telephone ice cream?...Green mouse ice cream was the worst.








Since: 08-17-04
From: The Dreaming

Since last post: 4451 days
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Posted on 08-21-05 02:29 AM Link | Quote
Well that was an interesting little story. Seems like there is a moral or two in there. However, I agree with Elara on that. Poor lollipop, we barely knew thee.
MisturMoogle

Thief








Since: 02-02-05
From: U.S.A.

Since last post: 6485 days
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Posted on 08-27-05 09:42 PM Link | Quote
I second Elara's motion. lol It was pretty good though. It reminds you not to let material things get in between you and your friends. And that objects or possessions can turn friends against each other.
Broken Dreams

Thief








Since: 05-29-05
From: California

Since last post: 6625 days
Last activity: 6625 days
Posted on 09-15-05 06:52 AM Link | Quote
lol yay im so glad people actually posted in here <.< sorry it took me so long to post back hehe but yes there are lessons that need to be learn to, friendship is important and if the first boy was a real friend he would of bee happy for his other friend I think the main point of it was the younger boy should of stucked up for, for what he liked and wanted and got, the older boy was selfish an dthe younger boy was a scardy cat.

lol I guess people can look at this story in different ways cause I kinda used a real life story from mine and mixxed it up turning it into a different story trying to make myself a lilipop. silly silly me lol
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