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caxama Archer          Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6793 days Last activity: 6406 days |
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| Alone is a darkness that laughs in your face
When you wake up it will all be erased You think you're safe I have been scared and even shead a few tears Lying down in my cold bed thinking It's not real My eyes almost closed Brain half asleep Mind in Wonderland It must be the heat Now I want to go to bed and Now I am beneathe alone's wing. |
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X Marks the Spot Banned. Lack of maturity Hack threats IM Harassment  Since: 10-06-04 From: Petaluma, CA Since last post: 6803 days Last activity: 6689 days |
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| Shead?
Beneathe? Improve the spelling... |
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Jexim Asuka  Since: 10-07-04 From: California Since last post: 6596 days Last activity: 6473 days |
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| Dude... so not cool... don't be all about the grammer up in here... that was such a spammy post... ya... I remember this one too... it's not as good as some of your others... | |||
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X Marks the Spot Banned. Lack of maturity Hack threats IM Harassment Since: 10-06-04 From: Petaluma, CA Since last post: 6803 days Last activity: 6689 days |
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| I was actually adding constructive criticism, all your post did was complain about mine, therefore making your's more spammy than mine...
And that's not grammar, it's spelling... There's a difference. |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 6020 days Last activity: 5285 days |
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| I think it was the way you did it that needs improvement X.
Other than what X pointed out I like it. I like the other work that you've posted. I have my own poetry thread as well feel free to read and comment need the filler. |
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