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caxama

Archer








Since: 06-22-05
From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine

Since last post: 6422 days
Last activity: 6035 days
Posted on 07-05-05 01:46 PM Link | Quote
Alone is a darkness that laughs in your face
When you wake up it will all be erased
You think you're safe
I have been scared and even shead a few tears
Lying down in my cold bed thinking
It's not real
My eyes almost closed
Brain half asleep
Mind in Wonderland
It must be the heat
Now I want to go to bed and
Now I am beneathe alone's wing.
X Marks the Spot
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Since: 10-06-04
From: Petaluma, CA

Since last post: 6432 days
Last activity: 6318 days
Posted on 07-05-05 11:45 PM Link | Quote
Shead?

Beneathe?

Improve the spelling...
Jexim

Asuka








Since: 10-07-04
From: California

Since last post: 6225 days
Last activity: 6102 days
Posted on 07-06-05 11:57 AM Link | Quote
Dude... so not cool... don't be all about the grammer up in here... that was such a spammy post... ya... I remember this one too... it's not as good as some of your others...
X Marks the Spot
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Since: 10-06-04
From: Petaluma, CA

Since last post: 6432 days
Last activity: 6318 days
Posted on 07-06-05 04:31 PM Link | Quote
I was actually adding constructive criticism, all your post did was complain about mine, therefore making your's more spammy than mine...

And that's not grammar, it's spelling... There's a difference.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5649 days
Last activity: 4914 days
Posted on 07-06-05 05:01 PM Link | Quote
I think it was the way you did it that needs improvement X.

Other than what X pointed out I like it. I like the other work that you've posted.

I have my own poetry thread as well feel free to read and comment need the filler.
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