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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt          Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4339 days Last activity: 4333 days |
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| This is a short poem I wrote, I got a reply from the atlanta journal about this poem, so here I go...
As The Pendilum swings. . . As the pendilum swings and times your fate The horizon shows and says "its too late" Its a new tomorrow My soul is still hollow.... Only "He" can follow.... Today is the birth of a new day Only people around me are shrouded away Dancing all alone.... Feeling deepend inside Like an empty hollow... ...lets follow thy hollow! I laugh in the face of she Only born and raised as is he... was never exzisted in my life a distant suicide and my bloody ear that is silent, however can still hear! Inside this depessed mind is a little boy a happy boy, inside a clouded mind ...swimming in a pool of flames? Is my paradice lost? Is hope lost? only Time can tell... As the pendilum swings! ~fin You don have to understand this poem, in fact, I believe anyone can co-relate to this poem, it reflects my life however, the point of this poem is this. The pendilum must be stopped someday, and paradice will be found once it stopps, so i believe im on the arm of that pendilum, just swinging away as time slips away. Thats why ive been telling everyone that they need to post more about having a good day, it not only brings out smiles of people, but it brings a smile into yourself! Remember that you "certan people"! |
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AlpoRaggins Troubadour Not so much dead. Since: 12-11-04 From: Someday, Somewhere, Over the Rainbow Since last post: 6395 days Last activity: 6285 days |
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| Very nice! Thank you for being able to describe you're poem; I know some people who just write and don't even know what they're saying, they just write words that sound cool, throw them all into a piece, and get praised for it. Thats pretty cool how it was recognized by a newspaper | |||
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01001000 Slow Ride Take It Easy  Since: 01-10-05 Since last post: 6309 days Last activity: 5659 days |
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| Very nice poem, I like your work a lot.
And like Raggins said, I can understand this poem, other than a bunch of poems with jumbled up words to make the author sound intelligent and witty. |
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Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4339 days Last activity: 4333 days |
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| appreciate the thanks guys, hopefully ill have more stories and poems in thy future |
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