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Storm Eagle
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Posted on 08-29-10 09:58 PM

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Appearance: After his battle with Cyrus, Vincent went on a hiatus to study and become closer to his God. While away teaching the word of his father, Vincent entered a temple to pray. During his prayer Vincent was met by his God, who merged bodies with Vincent drastically altering his appeance. Vincent now has four arms, he still has his wings but, underneath Vincent's skin is an entanglement of thread like tenticles. Vincent also still has his magical robes.

Background: Once the angel of a forgotten religion Vincent went to earth to remind the mortals of his father's existance. Whilst there Vincent merged with his God, bestowing him with great and alien powers.

Powers/ Abilities:
Vincent's merging with his God has drastically increased his mastery over light and also granting him control over shadows and darkness.

Vincent also has increased perceptions allowing him to think then act even when being attacked by lightning.

Also if Vincent removes his robes he will unleash his God. Vincent's robes right now, while acting as a great defense, also seal in his God, keeping it from being tainted by the outside world. When Vincent removes his robes the seal is broken but, Vincent can use the threads to extend punches and such.

Weapons: Vincent has five swords all together now. Each being used with a specific element.

1. Earth Breaker- The earthbreaker is shaped like a triangular prism that is pointed at the top. The steel of this blade has been folded many times thus making it almost indestructable.

2. Spirit of Water-The spirit of water is a short katana almost half of a meter long. The blade is made of hardened ice, that has been enchanted to never melt. It also causes any wound to become frozen and as such would destroy the cells around the wound.

3. Storm's Eye-The blade of this sword is long and wide with holes going up the blade, these holes allow Vincent to control the storm's eye even when out of reach and they also cause a whistling sound whenever the blade is swung.

4. Charred Remain- The blade is long almost two meters (a bit more), and the blade can be heated to immense temperatures and suffer no harm. This sword is a simple katana.

5. The Merger Sword- Vincent can combine the swords into a single blade that he can weild with any hand as well as when it is away from him.

Vincent also carries various throwing knives, as well as shuriken

Edited to a better non godmod character. Critism would be appriciated.

(Last edited by Urban Astronaut on 09-13-10 05:36 PM)

Vile
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Posted on 08-29-10 11:12 PM

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Don't forget to mention what your abilities are, xD. Let people know how insanely powerful your character REALLY is.

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Posted on 08-30-10 02:05 AM

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I agree with Vulkar.

I also believe that Phoenix or Hawk would destroy this canary of a fool.

Fear the Dark Admin.

Storm Eagle
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Posted on 08-30-10 02:09 AM

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Well if you'd hurry up and die in one of our previous battles you'd be able to face him.

Vile
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Posted on 08-30-10 02:48 PM

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Originally posted by Dark Horse Xeo
I also believe that Phoenix or Hawk would destroy this canary of a fool.

I helped him design it, I'd be careful were I you, xD. This character can be almost (though not quite) as powerful as Alex.

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Posted on 08-30-10 02:50 PM

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Haha! We'll see

Besides, I helped him design Erabus. If he would use him correctly, you'd see just how powerful he was.

And Phoenix and Hawk are my two most versatile characters.

Phoenix also has light, lasers, etc. I have a few tricks up my sleeve with him. Hawk, on the other hand, has no limits so long as the symbols can be drawn.

Storm Eagle
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Posted on 08-30-10 04:13 PM

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Oh you'll see soon enough how immensely powerful he is. Just as soon as this battle kicks into high gear.

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Posted on 09-13-10 07:03 AM

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......

So if he has no internal organs anymore, he can't die. The only way to kill him (and not be godmodding) would be to burn him, which wouldn't work anyway... He can't drown; he has no lungs. He doesn't breath, which is very questionable. Electricity will have no effect. And even if these did work, you gave him the mastery of all the elements, removing all weaknesses possible.

I mean, Alex can't even rip the energy from your body because you have no fucking organs. I guess he can disable your nerves, but that would be a GM. However, I think this whole character is now a GM.

You literally made a character invulnerable to physical and elemental attacks.

The only way to defeat him is to hold him by force, which I'm sure you would end quickly by using your mastery of fucking everything. Sure, it'd be an okay idea for a book or something, maybe even a movie. It would add a nice twist.

But this is simbattling.

Vile
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Posted on 09-13-10 10:30 AM

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Vince, I made you what I already viewed as a very powerful and diverse character (you never posted exactly what made him powerful), one more than capable of helping you to learn to be creative during combat. A character like unto Alex.

Once we created this character, you asked me what crosses the line into GMing, and I told you that simbattling was a writing exercise, designed for two opponents to improve their writing in a small competition, and that you're GMing when you make your character unreasonably powerful in that your opponent is unable to practice their writing in combat.

So, while its actually Cairoi, not me, who's in charge of simbattling, I'm going to ask, does this character cross that line? Is there anyone who would want to fight a character who they can learn nothing from?

I for one would not ever fight this character, even though just reading through your profile I saw several ways of killing him. However, I would be unable to be creative with my character, instead limited only to me using telekinesis on you, end even that you could counter if you used your first ability properly.

Using a character like this also limits how much you can learn as a simbattler. You can learn to write, "I'm immune to fire," or "I'm immune to drowning," or, "that stab did nothing but unleash the ancient god thing I have in my body."

So yeah, I'd reccomend some changes, even though Cairoi is technically in charge of all this.

Storm Eagle
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Posted on 09-13-10 05:37 PM

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He has been edited to make him less godly, lemmie know what you think.

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Posted on 09-13-10 05:41 PM

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Still GMish. You gave him mastery of shadows, too. So basically, he is an elemental Braksa. That is a God.

Honestly, I think you should have just left him the way he was.

Storm Eagle
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Posted on 09-13-10 05:43 PM

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He doesn't have control over the elements anymore, it's just light and shadow. he has five swords but they don't give him powers they're just named that.

Vile
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Posted on 09-13-10 06:04 PM

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Yeah, but...

He already had control over shadow.

Darkness is nothing but the absence of light, as is shadow. All you had to do was remove light from an area, and you'd make shadow.

Now, if you were talking about doing something Braksa-like...well, that's pretty much pointless with a character who can use light to make a knife appear behind an opponent and stab him...using shadows to do the same thing really does nothing but limit your powers.

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Posted on 09-13-10 06:08 PM

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Edit-Actually Vulkar, could you move this profile into Game Over, i'm going to continue using Vincent, but i'll describe him in the fight he's in i don't like having to follow a pattern and like Xeios said you can never expect someone to read your profile, so these things are pretty much for naught.

(Last edited by Urban Astronaut on 09-13-10 06:10 PM)