Originally posted by One Shot One Kill

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too much mikuuuuu

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Originally posted by Junpei Jones

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Needs more Kaito.

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Originally posted by True Flight

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Too much Mikuuuu

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Originally posted by True Flight

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Miku VN 02 Mix

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Originally posted by Katana

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Right, maybe I should look up who this chick is before commenting, or perhaps, if you've used a source image, I could see that?

The piece looks good. I've been a fan of your coloring since I've seen your work here. I do recall asking what you did it in and perhaps it was you, but you did it in something other than photoshop, and I was utterly impressed. Quite frankly, I am too lazy to look at your old Miku threads to double check on that. So in short, the work is good.

However, you said something seemed a bit off to you, so I purposely looked for a problem. Art school has turned me into quite the snob, says my "non-art school friends" as they call themselves...but in reality, I just understand how frustrating it is when people don't take enough care to look at my work for more tan two seconds. So, tell me if I am insulting, and I won't do this to you again, but I'm going to point out the "bad"

I don't particularly like how skinny she is at the top, and how you can only see one boob. I understand about angle and stuff, but the right side (my right as I'm looking at it) seems a bit flat. HOWEVER, there poses another conundrum. Okay, so you add a little more curvature on the right side...now what? Well, now they look TOO close together...hence why the top seems a bit thin to me. I dunno...I could probably be of more assistance if I saw the actual source, whether you just borrowed, or drew exactly what you saw....because I've seen "professional" work that looks like that, and maybe it's the style of the character in itself and I'm failing to see it.

HELL I need to learn to talk less. But, I like what I see, therefore put more interest in expressing what I see in the work.

Cheers.

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