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Modest Revo Merchant          Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| The first pic is pretty nice, and gives a feeling of modest minimalism.
Your second one is rather decent, though the flesh from the abdomen down seems to lose all of it's muscle contractions and flow of proportion. There's no musular chisels on the legs to dignify if it's a brash muscular tight-pants, or there are no wrinkles in it at all to dignify if it's just regular pants. I see some attempts at trying to shade the second picture, however that's usually just you using gradients, which is really, really repulsive when used with anime styles. The minute muscular chisels on the body are pretty decently defined and bolded a bit more, but you could of added some shading to give that real flare into it. Your fourth one is just rather blurry and messy, though I know you tried to give a fiery feeling to it, it's just not working out with all of these minute brush strokes that don't look crispe. I feel the need to say something encouraging and appealing about your work, since I have a slight problem of being too harsh with my critiques; so nice work. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Towering above the mountains and soaring across the sky, a minute speck of smoke residue sped throughout the reigon, encompassing and anaylzing the minuscule platform where the rather small warrior, from below, inhabited.
As it was doing more long, circular bouts around the warrior, a more defined human-like mechanized unit appeared -- having already been more close the warrior and more confident with his final examinations and inspections of the area, Hayato turned on the intercom box and spoke to the warrior. Hayato: Though I am not as accomplished as my other combatnants, I will take you on this test of wits and guts. After saying that, Hayato pulled his unit down and it landed with an immense force that triggered an up-gust of wind that knocked every paltry-weight debris off the cliff. Now, the mechanized unit, in it's full glory, was face to face with the warrior. Hayato: However, there is the matter of fact that I am commanding a steel monstrosity, my Zietgiest, to play along in your little test of wits and guts, so if you feel the need to retreat and flee, now would be the time. OOC: Keep in mind that Hayato is a very different and unique character, since he is devoid of any magical abilities and has little to none fighting skill, he uses an assortment of mechas to do his job. (Last edited by Modest Revo on 07-25-05 04:40 PM) |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Hmm, there are 2 generations of Shin-Ra here. Us, the second generation of Shin-Ra, started in Anfiniti, though the first generation of Shin-Ra is pretty nomadic, I think. | |||
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Well, for one thing, you're using realism shading, which is usually a no-no to Anime style. Though, there are some Anime works that have realism shading which look really good, however it's more best to stick realism shading with realism drawing or, unless you have learned how to shade properly with sensible and crispe, clean lines. Basically, look into cel-shading.
Your fourth piece, of the boy, looks rather mediocre because of his unproportional shoulders. (They're too short!) |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Hmm, it'd be fun to have a rival clan, though. | |||
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| As the earth malevolently shaked, Hayato could feel it, even in his metal contraption, Hayato could still feel it.
Hayato: Wha--? The ground.. it's moving! Just then, a great fissure opened up and out emerged gigantic outcrops that sped fast at Hayato. With little time to respond, Hayato shifted his controls up and anchored Zietgiest forward into the sky, having only the leg portions of it being knicked by the sand that seemed to have life on it's own. Up in the sky, Zietgiest was in a down-right position with his back facing toward the clouds, and his face facing toward the warrior; looking through the observation screen, Hayato could see the warrior standing on the earth platform, staying solemn and quiet, as if it mustered nothing to control something Hayato has always admired, magic. Now, Hayato focused in on the warrior and made sure of it that he was not about to move. The grey hues focused in more and more, targetting his and getting ready to fire his ammunition. Hayato: This should keep his composure! Immediately after Hayato said that, the Zietgietst flew down stead-fast and fired many rounds of bullets from the built in machine gun armaments that were attatched to it's shoulder. Once it had exausted it's limit of going downward in a fast motion, Ziegiest immediately pulled up, creating a swooping-style attack. From above, nothing but dust appeared. Hayato: Hmmm. (Last edited by Modest Revo on 07-26-05 02:07 AM) |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| As the two warriors were mid-air in the sky, Cairoi performed an odd attack where a gassy form of magic developed from his body pin-pointed itself at Zietgiest and launched itself with a volatile speed.
Immediately knowing that this gas would create some kind of negative status buff to Hayato such as sleep or confuse, Hayato used the item Pilot Protectorate, which of course, blocked out negative stat buffs and spells that tried to target the pilot. Outside of Hayato's armored core, a golden shield of glory emitted and repelled the gaseous attack away, relieving Hayato of any gassy problems. Hayato: Heh, like no one has tried to do something like that to me.. Hayato sardonically said as he took out Zietgiest's humongous Batallion Caldabolg which covered a very large radius of the position of where Cairoi and Hayato were between. Hayato: Get ready for this! Pulling his control left and right, Hayato commanded Zietgiest to take a number of quick slashes at Cairou. Now, Hayato was pretty confident that some damage was done to Cairou because of his futile air maneuver that left him wide-open. 6 Items are left in the Zietgiest's current inventory: 1: 2. -???- 3. -???- 4. -???- 5. -???- 6. -???- 7. -???- (Last edited by Modest Revo on 07-26-05 02:44 AM) |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| As Hayato saw the energy blast coming up upon Zietgiest, he did nothing more but switch his weapon from the Batallion Caldabolg to the automatic sniper rifle; for he knew that Pilot Protectorate would protect him from any attacks that threatened the pilot.
Suffering from a minor blow of the energy blast, Hayato opened his intercom to give him words of "advice." Hayato: It's futile to get to my core without destroying my titanium caraprace! Now with the automatic sniper rifle in place, Hayato used "F-Charge." Then, a small packet exerted out of a slot and Zietgiest put it in the chamber of the automatic sniper rfle, empowering it with 60% weapon charge. Now, when the giants boulders were about to hit Zietgiest, Hayato pulled the trigger of the automatic sniper rifle, which made Zietgiest fire the composite replacement beam for the rifle. Streaking through the air, the long beam corroded through the boulders and shot right at the target, Cariroi. Now, cariroi had to be hit somehow. The streaking beam had gone through the bolders with impressive speed and extreme impact, crushing the ground with an immense force and leaving a large crater in place. Never ever allowing Cariroi to escape the beam's fast speed. Now, the debris from the boulders were speeding down, everything was a complete mess in the sky; the sky was falling. 5 Items remain in Zietgiest's inventory. 1. 2. 3. -???- 4. -???- 5. -???- 6. -???- 7. -???- (Last edited by Modest Revo on 07-26-05 03:49 AM) |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Hmm, in my time, I think we've fought 3 Avalanches.
And.. there was also: Fusion, Anfiniti Guardians, Anti Shin-Ra clan, Titan Resistance, TITAN clan, the infamous Ronso Fangs, UNSC (or however it was abbreviated.), and other various minor factions. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Hmm, gotta be Brad Pitt. | |||
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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Originally posted by Modest Revo While being unattended from the free-falling debris of boulders in the sky Hayato had previously fired back down upon, the boulders fell down with a shakening force, right upon Cairoi as he was absorbing particles for his attack. Surely Cairoi had not enough time to escape the plummeting debris from above whilst he was charging for his attack, Hayato thought. And now, since Cairoi was trapped under the debris of boulders, wounded and barricaded; Hayato quickly activated the shoulder-mounted machine guns to be switched to the 2x cluster missile pod. As the missile pods were rising, the hull's of Zietgiest gave off sickingly sounds of vibration and metal clad objects being scraped together, arising up, the 2x missile pods located the coordinates of the barricaded Cairoi and quickly launched off 2 sidewinder cluster missiles. Coming down, the cluster missiles performed aeronautical spiraling motions that left a snake-like smoke residue in the sky, when it hit, 2 mushroom clouds grew, and then finally 1 large mushroom cloud grew from the 2 small ones. Everything was dead; the plant life had burned off from the fire, the debris of boulders were replaced with hot-ashes, creature life seemed to halt, and even the large 50 foot platform of a cliff started to give up. The outcomes of the land were devestating. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Cliche anime girls in video games have swords that are bended?
Interesting.. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Yeah, tell me about it. o.O
I remember reading his profile's back in our root forum. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Yeah, I don't like "Artful Dodgers" all too much either.
So many people try to dodge my massive mechas that basically encompass half the distance of their setted field.. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Heh, I'm not in this tournament, but it'd be nice to implement some of these ominous theories and upgrades you have later on. | |||
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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Some scenery I did with PS brushes.
More mech concepts..! 
I used some complicated program that really isn't complicated at all.. 
*Touched up in PS Pretty old. I forgot all about the shading in this one. 
Anyhoo, C&C welcomed. |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| Hey, that looks pretty nice, I like. | |||
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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| While Mika and Benja divulged on exchanging their self-indulgence's to each other, Hayato, the Modest Revo, had been standing there silently, unnoticed by all.
Reaching into his pocket, Hayato pulled out a archaic-like pocket watch that ticked lucidly with a nostalgic ambience. Having been outside of his pockey, the pocket watch ticked louder and alerted the cossetting couple that they were not alone, however in a frank manner, the couple simply turned their heads and focused on coddling each other again. Having seen what the hour was, Hayato discarded his pocket watch back into his pocket and continued watching the fight. "Everyone tries to dodge every thing, now. It's become such a cliche thing to do now a'days." |
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Modest Revo Merchant Since: 07-20-05 Since last post: 6797 days Last activity: 6653 days |
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Originally posted by Kaijin Surohm Nope, you're not the only one; from what I'm reading, it came out of his suitcase that just "magically" appeared, regardless of the fact that he didn't mention anything about it in his introduction. You should stick to the items that you mentioned in the introduction, because it wouldn't be fair to people that you have "secret weapons." More ore less, you could of mentioned that you had a suitcase at the start and not tell her what was in it. Originally posted by Kaijin Surohm Yes, though he tried to look quite modest by giving himself that bruise to the arm, it still didn't cut it. Because, an attack of that calibur, and the situation he was in, it would be considered as god-modding his reflexes and speed. (Last edited by Modest Revo on 08-10-05 12:34 AM) |
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