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Cteno Super Shotgun Moderator         Since: 01-11-05 Since last post: 92 days Last activity: 90 days |
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I decided to draw some ecchi! Took about 3 hours altogether in Paint Tool SAI. Erm, enjoy!
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The Accidental Protege Iggy Koopa I\"m your accidental protege... The gift, the blood, the thrownaway...\" Since: 03-08-05 From: Marching on the city of Southern Cross Since last post: 1166 days Last activity: 1166 days |
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| Proportions are a bit whack, especially in the hips; it looks way too thin there. Much thinner compared to the shoulders. Breasts come a tad low on the chest, making them look awkward, and mouth appears a bit off kilter, I'm not sure why. Legs seem way too thin, unless you're trying to give her the figure of an eight-year-old (but then, why include chesticles?).
Decent enough job on the coloring, nothing too outstanding, but it's not a bad job, either. When it comes right down to it, anatomy needs work, but it's not bad enough to redraw it; learn from it instead.  |
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| It's all a learning experience for me, I'm mostly concerned about the color. I wouldn't mind re-drawing this one in the least bit. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Rogue If you're reading this... You are the Resistance Since: 08-17-04 Since last post: 634 days Last activity: 442 days |
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Well, that's a thousand times better than I can draw. It looks damn hot too. 
The only thing that weirds me out a little is what's going on between her legs. I get that it's supposed to be her rear, but it's a bit odd. Still, HAWT! (Last edited by Rogue on 08-08-09 12:50 AM) |
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| Also, I hate thongs, that wasn't my intention but I had no other choice as it couldn't have gone anywhere else...
Aaanyway, I was planning on redrawing the whole thing with her boobs and hips suddenly getting bigger and the ribbons starting to shred, with a look of terror on her face. I thought it would be hilarious! |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 100 days Last activity: 100 days |
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Originally posted by Raoh You missed the angle of the eyes with the face. |
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Cteno Super Shotgun Moderator Since: 01-11-05 Since last post: 92 days Last activity: 90 days |
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I had a horrible time with the eyes, mostly because I screwed up the resolution when I drew it. I didn't notice how small I made it until I started coloring but it was too late to go back so I worked with what I had. The eyes looked a lot worse before I started coloring it actually, as seen below.
This one shows what people have critiqued upon so far, minus a few newer ones. Mostly, bigger boobs, bigger hips and... Uh, 1 futa request.  |
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Xeoman Ball and Chain Trooper Administrator  Since: 08-14-04 From: 255 Since last post: 88 days Last activity: 76 days |
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| Make the ribbons tentacles.
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Originally posted by Xeu The obvious step after that is to animate it. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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