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Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 02-13-07 12:49 AM Link | Quote
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(Last edited by Makura on 07-12-08 11:50 PM)
FX

Zombie Marco








Since: 03-24-06

Since last post: 3591 days
Last activity: 3487 days
Posted on 02-13-07 01:06 AM Link | Quote
Wow, that was incredible. Almost nothing happened, yet you've got me incredibly enthralled. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 73 days
Last activity: 73 days
Posted on 02-13-07 08:36 PM Link | Quote
Excellent visuals as usual, Makura. I have to admit that the end was really not something that I was expecting, but was very enthralling. How do you connect the first paragraph to the second though?
Cairoi
This isn't about you and your loud mouth,
This is about me and my fucking beard.








Since: 08-29-04
From: PA

Since last post: 4610 days
Last activity: 4233 days
Posted on 02-13-07 08:43 PM Link | Quote
I love your work as always, Makura. I wasn't orginally going to read this, but you happened to work in the subject of the soul in the beginning, something I've been thinking very, very deeply about lately, and that grabber forced me to read it.

I'm happy I got to read it. You outclass me beyond comprehension, and I hope one day you can make success out of your skill.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 02-14-07 01:09 AM Link | Quote
Thanks for the comments. Cairoi, you're writing is growing at a rate that is very pleasing and you shuld be proud. Elara, this is going to be a novel and you'll see it unravel more as I write more. I'm gald you guys like it, I'll try to post some more of it by next week.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 73 days
Last activity: 73 days
Posted on 02-18-07 04:06 AM Link | Quote
Hmn, I look forward to your next update then. At first I thought that this was just a one shot, so I am pleased to hear that there shall be more.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 03-12-07 09:28 AM Link | Quote
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(Last edited by Makura on 07-12-08 11:50 PM)
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 73 days
Last activity: 73 days
Posted on 03-19-07 03:59 PM Link | Quote
Interesting. Very different from the ending of the first post.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 03-26-07 10:10 AM Link | Quote
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(Last edited by Makura on 07-12-08 11:50 PM)
Spartan

Metal battleaxe
Is back. Kind of.








Since: 11-15-04

Since last post: 2090 days
Last activity: 1331 days
Posted on 04-08-07 02:31 AM Link | Quote
Filler Stitchy...

I woudl read this but I unfortunaly dont have time.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 04-08-07 02:32 AM Link | Quote
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WhiteRose

Warrior
Sailor Delerium

Have you ever spent days and days and days making up flavors of ice cream that no ones ever eaten before? Like chicken and telephone ice cream?...Green mouse ice cream was the worst.








Since: 08-17-04
From: The Dreaming

Since last post: 4213 days
Last activity: 4917 days
Posted on 04-16-07 03:27 AM Link | Quote
Filler Kitty To the Rescue. I've only read a little bit, but it seems really good. I'm gonna have to come back when I'm fully awake to read the rest.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 04-16-07 01:12 PM Link | Quote
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(Last edited by Makura on 07-12-08 11:50 PM)
Pockets

Werewolf
pockets








Since: 10-20-04

Since last post: 4852 days
Last activity: 4368 days
Posted on 04-22-07 11:20 PM Link | Quote
You used my favorite line. I love it.

Better than a sharp stick in the eye.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 04-25-07 12:57 AM Link | Quote
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(Last edited by Makura on 07-12-08 11:50 PM)
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 73 days
Last activity: 73 days
Posted on 04-28-07 10:22 PM Link | Quote
On my screen, for some reason, the seperators are question marks. Is that supposed to be there or was it something else?

Anyway, I really like the way you wrote the first part of that. Background info is always fun.
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 05-03-07 10:10 AM Link | Quote
They show up as boxes in my post, but in a word processor they are cute little symbols.
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 73 days
Last activity: 73 days
Posted on 05-05-07 06:45 PM Link | Quote
I hate it when symbols don't transfer over. Oh well, so where is the next installment?
Makura









Since: 01-22-05
From: The restaurant at the end of the universe....

Since last post: 5648 days
Last activity: 4913 days
Posted on 05-06-07 01:44 PM Link | Quote
Well I'm having major issues with writing this. since it's semi-based on actual event I really have a hard time picking what's next and it's driving me fucking nuts. I have sort of a plot figured out, but then again I have a few ideas on what I want the ending to be like it's just a matter of getting from here to there.
WhiteRose

Warrior
Sailor Delerium

Have you ever spent days and days and days making up flavors of ice cream that no ones ever eaten before? Like chicken and telephone ice cream?...Green mouse ice cream was the worst.








Since: 08-17-04
From: The Dreaming

Since last post: 4213 days
Last activity: 4917 days
Posted on 05-07-07 12:38 AM Link | Quote
*honk honk* Filler kitty driving through! *honk* Really gotta stop and read this when I have time *drives off*
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