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Cairoi This isn't about you and your loud mouth, This is about me and my fucking beard.         Since: 08-29-04 From: PA Since last post: 4629 days Last activity: 4253 days |
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| I look ahead with an open mind
It could end or I could find There's nothing really final at all I wander these asphalt streets where the path I believe I took meets With another one I soon will I smile at the clog and destruction It's nothing but urban seduction To street rats without a home I wonder if I've found the end Therein my feelings ascend But I realize long after the fall I have not reached the end at all. This poem was basically brought into being by me walking around and taking in the true nature of city I live in. It all came to me off the top of my head, and I liked it enough to share it with you guys. Thoughts? (Last edited by Cairoi on 05-09-06 08:59 PM) |
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Makura Since: 01-22-05 From: The restaurant at the end of the universe.... Since last post: 5667 days Last activity: 4933 days |
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| I like the imagery. The good thing about poetry is it gives the readers mind room to wander and make their own connection. Good work. |
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