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caxama Archer          Since: 06-22-05 From: Petaluma, CA, you just gotta love that sunshine Since last post: 6665 days Last activity: 6278 days |
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Once I was lovely Skin as fine as china Every one looked at me And no one ran away Until One day I woke up My smile is gone My china has cracked I am not the same My hair has lost its shine Moths eaten away my clothing The paint peels away I am covered in dust No one looks anymore I count the falling paint chips There are more chips then skin I can no longer see I fall to pieces on my shelf One last thought in my head Where is my repairman? Who will restore my life? |
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Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 105 days Last activity: 105 days |
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| Nice imagery, and I really love the single word stanza before you described the slow distruction of the doll. Great job! | |||
Bitmap #1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt  Since: 09-05-04 From: His Laughin' Place Since last post: 4562 days Last activity: 4556 days |
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| Sounds alot like Dr. Jeckel and Mr. Hyde...cept your hope is a special someone...Me like me like...
Great creative writing... |
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