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Broken Dreams

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Since: 05-29-05
From: California

Since last post: 6387 days
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Posted on 01-24-06 03:15 AM Link | Quote
well I have a few poems but I will post one at a time.....some really arn't that good...most are really crappy but...I guess at the time I was just pretty much saying how I felt.


A Sighting of Dark Eyes
What's behind dark, deep, brown eyes,
a falling smile late night cries,
a young women begins to grow
for all she is theirs little she lets show,
feeling alone no sense of family,
no dad no mom will someone find me,
Who am I? Do I fit in somewhere?
just one good friend so I once again care.
people always try to knock me down
but I will never show them one single frown,
someday I will show them all,
I'll have a family and a home
I can always call my own,
so I finally understood what true strength means,
it's being able to keep a strong heart
when everyone else expects you to fall apart.
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#1 Enhancement Shaman US Ravenholdt








Since: 09-05-04
From: His Laughin' Place

Since last post: 4318 days
Last activity: 4312 days
Posted on 01-24-06 06:46 PM Link | Quote
oooohhhh the wonders I can probibally do to work this poem...

I liked this poem alot, reason being is because i can feel you muster your skills on the people around you, which is the same way I do when I write songs and poems.....and mostly stories...

Keep up the good work broken, hopefully I will expect more!
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