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| Please note that there is some inaccurate part in this story because of the system that was used in Fire Emblem 4. The lover pairing tends to be confusing and many things can be based on how I played throughout the story. But I hoped it look right enough to keep it interesting. Oh, I think I might have screwed up a little bit but you just need to bear with me since I didn’t get the whole story.
Oh, there may be tons of spoilers as well. So read at your own risk. =P Wow, I just wrote this long and I cried in most parts while trying this. And I kept some of the story separate so there are different feelings to each one of them. ~~~ It seem that it was a long time ago, that Celice and Yuria finally ended the war that Julius have brought upon. The Loputousu Clan was no more, after Yuria struck the last blow with her heritage weapon, Narga. It seems forever, but it was only the short amount of time that they long returned to their country. “Celice… What can we do now?” A funky orange hair priestess asked, she could be no more then 17 years old. Her orange eye was somewhat large but she look very sincere just about to everyone. What is more important is that she was already in love with Celice. “Celice… Can we rebuild the country the way it was before?” “Rana, we can do it… True, we may not escape the fact that the child hunt exists but… we can always do our bests to right the wrong…” said a young lord who was known as the Prince of Light. He seems around 15 years old, and everyone knew of his father, Sigurd. Celice didn’t remember much about his father, but one of his advisor and closest friend, Oifaye, knew him when he was young. Celice’s blue hair was more laid back but a headband hold his hair so that it would not fall in front of his face. His gentle blue eye examines the Castle of Barhara. It was very clean and tidy, after Julius was killed. Julius was mostly hated person because he leaded the child hunt and wants to resurrect the dark god, Loputousu. He shared much of resemble appearance of his father, Alvis, but with that tattoo on his forehead. But the Castle of Barhara was more then it appeared. It was the mark of Celice’s father’s grave. Shortly after Sigurd found that Alvis excuses that Sigurd was planning to start a war, Alvis executes him, along with some of his soldier who fought with him until the end. Just before Sigurd met his end, he saw his wife, Dierdre. Dierdre didn’t remember Sigurd but that was part of Alvis’ plan. He need to erase Dierdre’s memory and uses her for many things… Until Julius was given birth shortly after Yuria was born. Celice walk outside, and it was already dusk. He looks up toward to the sky, seeing many stars shining for his succession and bravery. But he couldn’t have done it if it wasn’t for his fellow friends who also lost their parents when Sigurd died that moment. Soon, a young gray hair woman, who seem lost and somewhat afraid of life… Her circlets appear above her gray and easeful eye. Although she was young, she seems like a princess. But there was more to her look. She was related to Celice’s mother, but she was given birth by Alvis, where Celice was born by Sigurd. When Celice first saw her, Yuria didn’t remember anything, or what were her purposes. But when Celice and his troops proceed to save the child from the child hunt, Yuria was kidnapped at some point and remembers so much about Julius that she was fated to kill him. Dierdre, being both Yuria’s and Celice’s mother, wrapped Yuria away when Julius was out of control and trying to kill every Narga heritage. Sadly, just before she successfully ran away, Julius gave her a devastating wound. Shortly after warping away with Yuria, she died after that. “Celice… I know that this war is already over, but you need to… learn that what you did was right. I believed… that our mother and your father would be proud of you.” She spoke so quietly but with the sound of pleasant feeling. “See? They are shining for you.” Yuria points up at the sky, showing the two stars close together shining so brightly, it was enough for everyone to see that their passion will never dies. “Celice… I wonder how the other doing?” Rana asked as she made her appearance. She was very curious about how the other was doing, since some of Celice’s troops not only help Celice lead the war but also return to their kingdom to promise Celice many things. “Well… I know Prince Shanan long enough. I believed that he would lead Isaac with great succession. And I know Leaf too. Probably he is going to help the Thracia to deal with it current problem about its food problem. And Sety… Man, I hope it was enough to see that Sety can reveal his thought to his father but I am worried about him. But I know that he is strong enough to hold his place… Well…” “Celice… Thanks you for making me feel better.” Yuria lean her head on Celice’s shoulder and Rana stood next to Celice. Rana smiled because not only she believed Celice, but also knew that Celice have been more mature then he was before. Although Yuria isn’t Celice’s brother, Celice treated her like one because he does not want to make Yuria worse then she was before. “Thank you, everyone… Without you, we would never make it this far.” Celice sighed as he looks at the ocean of stars shining brightly with two of the ladies. ~ Somewhere to the southeast of the Yied Desert are a mountainous country and the kingdom that is well known for it fertile soils. When the war ended, Thracia and Lenster have finally come into an agreement. They signed a treaty and eventually gave each other a brighter future. A young brown hair prince of Lenster looks at an older mercenary leader of Thracia signed the treaty, promising that as long as they provided troops to ensures Lenster’s defense, they would provides food and supply. Not long after that, they never declare war on each other ever since. Leaf looks at Arion, who also with her sister, Altenna. Arion believed that even through he may not control Thracia as a kingdom, he entrusted it to Leaf that Thracia would vow not to break it promise anymore. Altenna looks at Arion, wondering why would he give up and become as mercenary. “Arion… Are you sure you want to do this?” Altenna whispers into his ear. Arion looks at her, straight in her brown eyes. He pushed back some of Altenna’s long and silky hair, trying to put her at ease. It was more then enough for Altenna, because even through Altenna was Leaf’s brother, she have more feeling for Arion. Arion, even through he knew that Altenna wasn’t her real sister; always have a feeling for her. Just in time to assist Sigurd’s army, Cuan and Ethlin rose along with some of Lenster’s troops, hoping that Sigurd would be glad to see them. But they never knew that Thracia slowly approached them when Cuan and Ethlin rose toward Sigurd’s army. When they appear at the Yied Desert, the Thracia launched a surprise attack on them. Being helpless on the desert, each troops was being slaughter one by one by the powerful army of Thracia. None could survive well, and soon it leads only to Ethlin and Cuan. Cuan knew that Ethlin brought her baby along to the battlefield but when the Thracia fought against her, she was defenseless and was killed, protecting her recently newborn. Trabant, being the main leader of this army, heard the cry of the baby. He knew that in order to have Cuan give up his Gae Bolg, his heritage holy weapon, he would threaten to kill Altenna, the newborn baby. Cuan, being in the crisis of this situation couldn’t risk of seeing her new daughter being killed. He finally gave up his Gae Bolg to Trabant and was shortly killed after that… Trabant then leave the battlefield to return to his kingdom, with Gae Bolg and Altenna in his procession. Sigurd’s army soon killed the remaining army… It was even sad that Leaf and Altenna did not know what their parent look like at a young age… Leaf wants Altenna to stay, because even through they have been long apart, Arion believed that Altenna can bring Thracia at ease and her brother would be glad to help her anytime she need. “Altenna, there are several thing I need to do… Your brother needs you to stay at Thracia, and I know you can do this for me. I need to clear myself up… I don’t know what will happens, but remember… No matter how difference we are, I always love you… Not as who you are, but as being my sister. Someday… I will visit you.” Leaf looks between the two odd couple. He knew that even Arion wasn’t related to Altenna, he still treated her like his sister. He smiles, knowing that it may be a while that Altenna know what life is, but still couldn’t bare the pain of her sister if something bad was to happen her. Altenna began to shed some tears, flowing down to her cheek. Arion raise his hand and pushed away the tears that Altenna shed. “Altenna, you should go with your brother now… I know we may not know each other much, but he is your family…” Arion spoke so clearly, yet it look like he was holding his feeling back. “No… Arion, please… Stay with me!” Altenna sobbed. “It doesn’t matter who you are! I always… I loved you!” Arion began to walk away and ride on his dragon. He took off and Altenna ran after him but failed to stop him. Altenna cry so bad, that it was enough that it may be the last time she may see him… She bends down to the ground, shedding so many tears and crying because of Arion. She still has feeling for him and wish that he would not left by her side… Leaf soon followed her after that. Seeing how painful she has to go through, Leaf told her that Arion would keep his promise. Altenna pushed Leaf to the side but instead, she cry on Leaf’s shoulder. “Why, brother? Why…?” “Altenna… There are things he wants to resent. He may not share the same feeling as you do, but he wants you to be strong.” “But why…? Leaf, I don’t care who his father is, or what happened to him… I still love him!” Leaf gave a sigh, and probably revealed his defeat. All he could say was, “He said, ‘Someday… I will visit you.’ Altenna, just remember that no matter where he is, he is always in your heart and I am sure he will remember you in his heart.” Altenna cry even harder then she was before, but slowly, she made her way to her sniffle. Leaf brushes her hair, trying to make her feel more comfortable. Even through they were apart for a long time, this was Leaf’s only chance to be with her, not as part of being a brother, but as part of her family. Leaf smiled and looks at Fin, who was standing by. Leaf walks over to Fin, wanting to thank him for all of the time he have been through. Fin, with his blue eye, examines Leaf’s eyes. He knew that his eye has the look of Cuan on his face. He saw that there are more then what he saw in the eye. He saw Cuan’s happiness and Ethlin’s love. It was them that brought Leaf and Altenna closer then they was before… “Well, this is just the beginning, Lord Leaf.” ~ “Lord Shanan! Lord Shanan! Wait up!” A child-like girl with a hat began running toward to a guy with long dark hair. “Shanan… Please wait up!” Shanan spun around and notice that girl with blonde hair and a hat was running toward to her. “Patty, what do you want? I have to go and help Isaac. There could be no telling of the situation in this country.” “I know, Lord Shanan… But you are going to need some help! I know you do!” Patty gave some deep breaths. They have traveling for quite a while and it was hard on her. Shanan knew that his country was in trouble and there was no time for small talk. Patty, however, was insult by this slight ignorance Shanan have. “Shanan, just give me some time… I know it may be a hard time for you but I want you to understand that no matter how hard rebuilding your country, just remember that I am there to help you.” “And by helping me, do you promises not to steal anymore?” “Umm… Gulp, you got me there… but don’t worry about that. Lakche and Johalva are there to help you as well. Right guys?” Two more people followed after them. One of them has dark short cut hair, with longer part of hair flowing in front of her ears. Other one has a green headband and hold up his brown hair. As if they look like they are not lover, they actually are quite of pairing together. They may be fighting often but it was passion and love that even brought them closer. “Patty, just because we are going to Isaac doesn’t mean we are going to help you.” Lakche spoke quite bluntly. “You see… We will help you and Prince Shanan to restore it back to it former glory but we have to considers about our people as well.” “Lakche… I am sure that my sister… Your mother would be proud.” It was true. Lakche and Shanan are very related to each other. Shanan was Ira’s sister, and Lakche was Ira’ daughter. “Ah… Lakche, you have matured since the last time I raised you.” “I – I- I am not a kid anymore!” Johalva began to laugh for a belief moment, but he believes that this was a good step for rebuilding the country. Not only that, but it helps built up their morale and uplifted the burden of their travel. “Well, guy… I believe that this may be the first step.” Johalva said with ease. “No matter who are our people is, we can never forget that it was everyone in Isaac who supports us until the end of the Holy War…” ~ Somewhere, in the snowy mountainous land to the northwest of the Yied Desert… There was a prince who rules that country, and stood on a frozen buried ground in front of a tombstone. On the tombstone, it said: Great Warrior, Wife, and Mother Of Two Died by sickness. “Mother… I found father… I told him how I feel and… Are you happy now? Are you happy to know that I finally gave out my feeling toward him?” The prince brushes his green hair, and turned around to see another warrior standing by him. It was female, also green hair with huge earring. She brought some flowers, uncommon to find some in such cold place like this. She looks somewhat sad but she was strong enough to hold back her tears. “Brother… Sety… I am glad… you came back.” “Fee… Mother would be proud of us. It was father who was a coward.” Fee’s green eye locked on to Sety’s green eye, and they stood there staring into each other eye. But when Sety noticed the flower Fee have, Sety smiled as he place his arm around Fee. “So you brought it for our mother?” “Sety… I wish she were here… I wish she were here to say how strong we are… I wish…” “Fee… You don’t need to hear her… She is already happy, and knew how strong you became. Her spirit can already be at peace.” Fee began to shed some tears. She was afraid but she did become strong. She dives into his brother’s arm, and sob so quietly, that she was happy that her brother was there. She never knew how proud her mother would be, and if she was still alive, Fee would never be any happier then she was before. Just after the moment, Sety and Fee stood before the grave, looking at tombstone. Fee, with the flowers in her right hand, threw it on the buried ground. Fee shed some tears, but a whisper came into her ear. “Fee… you have grown strong… I am proud of you… You made me happy… Now I can rest at peace… Knowing that you and Sety will bring great honor to our country.” Fee was shocked. She looks at Sety and asked if Sety heard that. “Fee, she asked me to look out for you…” Then they stood there for a moment, standing and waiting, until the sun behind those mountain rose up… “Sety… I’m glad this is over.” “Me too.” He replied. It was the beginning of new life, and new destiny that awaits for them… ~ Somewhere along the way to Lenster, an archer soldier came across a statue. With his amazement, he stopped and recognized that statue as his mother! He didn’t believe it, but it just proved that his mother WASN’T killed along with Sigurd. She made it this far and fought with Leaf. But at the same time, that blonde hair archer soldier quietly whispers her name. “Brigid.” Soon, three people came and saw that yellow hair archer standing in front of her mother. Two of them are Leaf and Fin, and the other one was Nanna. Nanna is a young female who was captured by a group of Thracian when Lenster was invaded. Leaf rescued her but the cost was losing someone’s life in return. Nanna spoke quietly as she saw the statue. “Eyvle…” “Uh?” The blonde hair archer was confused. This is Eyvle? But at this point, he was confused and looks at Leaf and then Nanna. He took a step forward and blocked their way. “Wait… Who… Who is this statue? Please, tell me her name!” Fin and Nanna were quiet, but Leaf noticed that it was Faval. Faval have blonde hair and look of 10 years old. However, he looks bold and ready to fight if there was any ambush. “Well, Faval… Her name was Eyvle and she stood by my side to help me get involve with the war… Sadly, she was kidnapped and forced to protected Nanna…” Faval shook his head. “That’s impossible! It’s Brigid! I know that face anywhere! I remember my mother’s face just before she left on a question!” Fin was shocked. He did remember meeting Brigid before, but only met her for a short amount of time. But what even remained more mysterious is that Fin can’t really remember if that was Brigid or not. Nanna, however, took a step forward at Faval. “Faval… I may not know her very well, but I want you to know… She saved my life… I don’t know what we can do for you, but… I am sorry to see that this warrior was petrified… And I want you to know that if it wasn’t for her, I would never survives… I am in debt to-“ “Please don’t say it… I am glad to know that my mother did something she needs to do… The war already ended, and she did her duties. I couldn’t ask more then having a mother who would put her life on the line for people like you…” Faval sniffed a little bit, but he finally was happy to see her mother. Heck, if Faval brought Patty here, Patty would know what her mother would look like. “Patty… I found her… Our mother… died protecting people.” The statue glowed in a mysterious blue color. Leaf, Fin, Nanna and Faval was surprise to see it glowing. They never thought it would happen but they are expecting Eyvle to be in complete flesh human being. After the glowing died down, nothing has changed. “What just happened?” Faval was confused. He didn’t notice any changes about Eyvle but Fin did. He pointed at Eyvle’s face, where her eye seems to shed some tears, and gave a smile at Faval. “Well… Look like your mother is happy for you.” Fin pat on Faval’s back. “No! It can’t be! And here I thought she would finally come back for me! Damn it… Mother… Couldn’t you as least say something for me?” No reply… “Damn it…” Faval began to sniff. He has high hopes for her, but after he saw glowing light fail, he feel horrible. “No… It is just impossible! Mother…” “Oh, man… I’m sorry to see that she haven’t recovered fully… Faval, just know that you are welcome to live at Lenster for a while… I know it doesn’t seem much but as least, I would like to you relax so that you can plan ahead next.” Leaf was offering Faval but being strong-will he is, he rejected it because he finally met her mother, regardless of what state she is in. “Leaf… Thank you for watching over her… Nanna… I am proud of my mother of keeping her duties until the end for you… But I must take my leave… I trust you to take care of my mother, okay? Just seeing her made me feel happy and calmer… I… As least there is a reason why I live… Thank you… Eyvle…” Faval waves good byes to Leaf and his companies and left. But when Faval has enough time, he would come back and place a flower at the foot of his mother’s statue, and someday, he would bring Patty to see her mother… ~ Being surrounded by the desert, Fin stood there as he looks at the sky. It was already night and the ocean of stars are twinkling. Fin walk around the desert for a little bit, trying to find someone, and finally stop for a moment. He saw something sticking out of the ground and walk over there. “Well sir, Leaf and Altenna are working harder then they are before…” Fin whispers to himself. “Yes… I understand… Is this what you wanted, sir? To finally have peace after a terrible war?” Fin looks at stick and noticed that sands are covering them up. He nodded then wonders about one more thing. “Cuan, Ethlin… Just promises me that no matter where you are waiting, you will watch over Leaf and Altenna… Just love them and be proud of them…” When the stick was fully covered up, Fin nodded as if he heard something. “Yes, my lord… I promise… Someday…” Fin looks at the stars. He knew that no matter what the world is or may be, Celice, Leaf, Shanan, Sety, everyone… will bring peace to the continent and someday, will met together again and become known as their bravery, love, and most importantly, their power to prevent from the world receiving the eternal darkness and pain… Fin whispers to himself. “As long as we continues to do what we believes in, we can remember every moments that bring us closer to our dreams.” ~~~ Well, what do you think so far? I am not sure if I should end this now because there are other people I forgot but writing their story is going to be major pain the ass. I know there may be ton of grammar problem but I want to hear the overall from someone’s opinion. And just for the record, it is almost 9 pages long and I am very proud of writing this fan fictions. |
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| As I told you, parts are sad, but it leaves off with a sense of hopefulness! I think it was ended really well - it was interesting to see your spin on how those characters would reminisce on the past. I'm usually not one for Fan Fiction all that much, but this one was an acception. |
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