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Vel Belmont

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Since: 07-18-05

Since last post: 6827 days
Last activity: 6422 days
Posted on 07-30-05 05:59 PM Link | Quote
My influences come from that of Dani Filth, so if you find this a bit familiar, in the writting style...then you know.

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The stars blanket the sky like a shimmering breeze
The touch of cold stone under her feet
As the grave man speak, she falls into this land
She lays her hand upon a concrete foundation of death
Which enabled one's soul to translate the worlds in sacred text
Anon...Where does she breath?
Across the open air, it is the fact that all men shall seek

A tortured soul lost and wonders this river of stone
A concrete pillar of writting upon the blessed alone
Eyes that feed upon the rivers that come to bleed
Her arms wide open, as her fingers torn and bleed
Come across this frail and unwanted body
She buries her feelings in the dirt of despair
As her angel comes to weave themselves in the air
A depressing matter comes to press her there

Silence is the night that takes her life
A screaming widow of defeat
As she pays her dues with the wanting of death
She unsleeves herself to a naked plain of disease
She is hunted by her former other a wicked dancer of spells
She laid her hand upon her forehead of thoughts
Driving the memory from her mind out to sea
A coffin of black velvet, a mahogony of trees
Sank in the sunset that would take there leave
As soon as she was ready, the knife comes to save
A broken soul under the moon as its heaven's loose their way

An ethereal voice comes to speak like a haunting mass scream
Creeping up from the shadows diguised as a beautiful dream
She wakes herself with the thoughts of becoming dead like one
But with perversions of thought that God had displeasingly done
She turns...and falls away, dying slowly as she cant hold sway
For there was no light left in her eye as she whored herself to the day
She felt disgusted and beaten under the leaves of this golden ray

Now the sun which bites at her ruby pale skin like a flame to the moth
She pushes herself to her grave, her feet slipping as she drives them away
Curses is the day when she breaks under way, the fallen of her grave
The warm dirt under her skin now feeds off her body till she gave
Carpets the grass like spiders weaveing their prey till they are stunned
A cheerful scream, an ode to her dream... all is none...
Elara

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable








Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 101 days
Last activity: 101 days
Posted on 07-31-05 04:37 AM Link | Quote
Very interesting Vel. I like the imagery and the diction even though I myself am not familiar with Dani Filth.
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