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Jedi Master Desroth

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Since: 08-24-04
From: Macomb

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Posted on 04-15-05 07:12 PM Link | Quote
*Feel free to sticky this any mods if you want, im sure people need to do requests for sprites.)*

any way, i just wanna post up my recent sword sprite... its kinda big, but i dont have a good enough program installed to do fine small detail work. im just getting into spriting and such, so i need yall commets. also, post requests for sprites and im sure people will answer if they see this.




thats my sprite. its not great, but it took me about 30-40 minutes start to finish...
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Posted on 04-16-05 09:42 AM Link | Quote
I'm gonna critsize your work...

If the sword you created is two handed, make the blade a lot longer and a little wider.
If the sword you created is one handed, make the hand guard smaller and the blade length a bit longer.

Those are my two cents.
Jedi Master Desroth

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Since: 08-24-04
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Posted on 04-16-05 10:02 AM Link | Quote
yes, i see what you mean. I kinda wanted to make a in between type sword (as in you can use it one handed and double handed, like a katana). maybe, i can cut down the length of the blade or the grip of the blade to make it more of a 1 to 2 handed sword. ill post the enhanced version here when i fix it up. thnx for ur comments!
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Since: 08-14-04

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Posted on 04-16-05 01:15 PM Link | Quote
<--- My avatar sprite. I just made it based on Fire Emblem. He look cool.

Hold on Desroth... You need to make a good design instead of just one type of color.

Take this sword for a example.

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See how that one side of the sword is darker then the on heafing northwest? Also, make sure you make a line to make the sword have a "sharp edge". And take a look at the hand guard too. It show many multiple color that seperate from being too "flat on" and make it more "pop-out".

And the handle seem kinda weird along with the hand guard as well. However, the way you are drawing seem more like it should be a flat-on blueprint... You still need to color to make a more detail drawing too. This way, most people would see how details they describe in the way you draw it.
Cyro Xero

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Since: 02-23-05
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Posted on 04-16-05 10:39 PM Link | Quote
It must have taken a while to make that sprtie. I can imagine the time spent on the detail work. Good job with it so far. That thing loks liek a teddy bear head at first glance. You were sort of making stuff up as you went along, weren't you?:
Jedi Master Desroth

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Since: 08-24-04
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Posted on 04-17-05 07:25 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Cyro Xero
It must have taken a while to make that sprtie. I can imagine the time spent on the detail work. Good job with it so far. That thing loks liek a teddy bear head at first glance. You were sort of making stuff up as you went along, weren't you?:


who is that directed towards? when u criticizes or give a thumbs up to someones work, put up the name of the person ur talking to, so there is no confusion....... if u were talking to me, i actually had a plan of what i wanted it to look like, now i just have to make it better..
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Posted on 04-17-05 10:31 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Cyro Xero
It must have taken a while to make that sprtie. I can imagine the time spent on the detail work. Good job with it so far. That thing loks liek a teddy bear head at first glance. You were sort of making stuff up as you went along, weren't you?:


I think he was referring to me, Desroth... Because I have the only one with a face sprite and you have a sword...

Heh, Cyro Xero, if you ever played Fire Emblem, you can see that I am "huge addict" to it and I thought it would be cool to make one of my own Fire Emblem sprite.
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