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Super Shotgun

Since: 01-11-05

Since last post: 1229 days
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Posted on 09-24-10 02:56 PM Link | Quote
A beautiful ghost
Stunning, entrancing,
No matter how hard I try,
I can never speak to you

A lovely apparition
Gorgeous, fascinating,
No matter how hard you try,
You can never keep me from caring

A graceful revenant
Pleasant, alluring,
No matter what we try,
We can never agree

A forlorn phantom
Gloomy, miserable,
No matter what you try,
Your heart is in agony

The one true Xeodent

Since: 01-08-10
From: Xeomerica

Since last post: 1085 days
Last activity: 1085 days
Posted on 09-24-10 07:34 PM Link | Quote
I like progressive change, and the poem overall.

Good job

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Ms. Invisable

Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 168 days
Last activity: 168 days
Posted on 09-27-10 08:53 AM Link | Quote
For some reason I am just super pleased that you used the term revenant. It doesn't get used enough. But yes, a very nice poem, and I also liked the progression.
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