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True Flight

The One

Since: 08-21-04

Since last post: 2301 days
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Posted on 08-10-10 10:26 AM Link | Quote
Boots are so heavy,
Not as heavy as my shoulders,
Carrying the world on my shoulders,
I want to cry when I see their faces,
They are so happy,
They suffer so much,
We give and give,
Yet it seems nothing has helped stop the attacks,
The alarm sounds and I hide under concrete,
What will happen next?
I can't see,
Nothing heard,
No explosion.
Just like every day,
Walking to work in the heat,
In my heavy boots.

Divine Mamkute
Dark Elf Goddess
Chaos Imp
Penguins Fan

Ms. Invisable

Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

Since last post: 178 days
Last activity: 178 days
Posted on 08-12-10 09:29 AM Link | Quote
Simple, yet good. I especially like the beginning. The line about the attacks seems a bit long and deracts a bit from the flow, but that is the only real criticism I can make.


Since: 09-09-11

Since last post: 4081 days
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Posted on 11-11-11 02:33 PM Link | Quote
Nice poem
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