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Cteno

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Posted on 08-07-09 10:11 AM Link | Quote
I decided to draw some ecchi! Took about 3 hours altogether in Paint Tool SAI. Erm, enjoy!
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Posted on 08-07-09 01:34 PM Link | Quote
Proportions are a bit whack, especially in the hips; it looks way too thin there. Much thinner compared to the shoulders. Breasts come a tad low on the chest, making them look awkward, and mouth appears a bit off kilter, I'm not sure why. Legs seem way too thin, unless you're trying to give her the figure of an eight-year-old (but then, why include chesticles?).

Decent enough job on the coloring, nothing too outstanding, but it's not a bad job, either. When it comes right down to it, anatomy needs work, but it's not bad enough to redraw it; learn from it instead.


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Posted on 08-07-09 04:09 PM Link | Quote
It's all a learning experience for me, I'm mostly concerned about the color. I wouldn't mind re-drawing this one in the least bit.
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Posted on 08-07-09 05:09 PM Link | Quote
Well, that's a thousand times better than I can draw. It looks damn hot too.

The only thing that weirds me out a little is what's going on between her legs. I get that it's supposed to be her rear, but it's a bit odd.

Still, HAWT!


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Posted on 08-07-09 08:29 PM Link | Quote
Also, I hate thongs, that wasn't my intention but I had no other choice as it couldn't have gone anywhere else...

Aaanyway, I was planning on redrawing the whole thing with her boobs and hips suddenly getting bigger and the ribbons starting to shred, with a look of terror on her face. I thought it would be hilarious!
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Posted on 08-13-09 11:27 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Raoh
Proportions are a bit whack, especially in the hips; it looks way too thin there. Much thinner compared to the shoulders. Breasts come a tad low on the chest, making them look awkward, and mouth appears a bit off kilter, I'm not sure why. Legs seem way too thin, unless you're trying to give her the figure of an eight-year-old (but then, why include chesticles?).

Decent enough job on the coloring, nothing too outstanding, but it's not a bad job, either. When it comes right down to it, anatomy needs work, but it's not bad enough to redraw it; learn from it instead.




You missed the angle of the eyes with the face.
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Posted on 08-13-09 11:58 PM Link | Quote
I had a horrible time with the eyes, mostly because I screwed up the resolution when I drew it. I didn't notice how small I made it until I started coloring but it was too late to go back so I worked with what I had. The eyes looked a lot worse before I started coloring it actually, as seen below.
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This one shows what people have critiqued upon so far, minus a few newer ones. Mostly, bigger boobs, bigger hips and... Uh, 1 futa request.
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Posted on 08-14-09 07:55 PM Link | Quote
Make the ribbons tentacles.

(had too)

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Posted on 08-14-09 08:29 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Xeu
Make the ribbons tentacles.

(had too)




The obvious step after that is to animate it.
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Posted on 08-14-09 10:00 PM Link | Quote
I knew it was a matter of time before you asked!
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