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Ryan

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Since: 10-01-04
From: Stafford, UK

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Posted on 01-25-08 05:57 PM Link | Quote
Omigad... That title sounds so cheesy.

Oh well!

I decided to finally begin writing the sequel to the short story I did a long time ago now called The Rescue.

Link to my FictionPress version of it.

EDIT: Oh yeah, forgot to mention this is just chapter 1


(Last edited by Ryan on 01-26-08 07:35 AM)
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Since: 08-15-04
From: Ferelden

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Posted on 03-19-08 03:59 AM Link | Quote
Well, I've read up to chapter 5. It's interesting, though it could use some touching up. More description and whatnot. I spotted a few typos as well, but nothing major.
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