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Lore Maxxum
Posts: 24/29
Thanx for your feedback. I still havent finished it... I havent had to time to do much really... Hopefully soon though...
Katana
Posts: 597/3649
Teehee...I remember you showing me this one...Though when you finish it, I dunno if you plan on coloring it or not...but I'd like to see it colored.
Evo
Posts: 611/871
Haha, yeah, I think that picture's harmless enough where everyone can see it. However, the finished version might be another story.
Cairoi
Posts: 585/3807
All of Nataku's critisicms are indeed rightly justified, but let me be the first in saying:

"I WANNA SEE THE FINISHED VERSION!!"

I do you know. So there.

-The Cairoi
Nataku Sherineui
Posts: 30/49
it looks good. the only things to fix are the gore, which should be more liquid-like instead on like a fountain. think of gravity and how it pulls on water. blood, though it's a bit more dense than water, flows the same way.
the other thing that needs to be fixed is the person's body. it looks like you spent a lot of time of the one holding the head, but the other body looks kind of poor. you might want to add more flesh to it and go fromj there. also, try adding another hand, perhaps grabing upwards. i know if someone were trying to rip off my head, i'd try to stop them. so try having the character show a bit of resistance. other than that, though, it's a really great piece!!! and trust me, blood is a hard thing to get used to drawing.
Van Rhanell
Posts: 239/337
Nice start. I really like the chain. Once you show the velocity of the arm that has the head, create some more detail in the innards streaming out and kind of make it an arc connecting from the neck to head instead of a straight line, it'll be great(considerably more graphic too). For more stuff like this to work off of, read Berserk.
DSMagnum
Posts: 14/368
That looks really cool. It isn't all that graphic to me though. And it does look like a fatality. I like it. I think it's really cool.
The Magical Being
Posts: 20/38
! ! ! ! OUCH ! ! ! !
DSMagnum
Posts: 4/368
Thats cool. It isn't really all that graphic to me, but that's just me. I think that's really cool though!
Cyro Xero
Posts: 1002/1778
A little graphic, yes. but not bad at all. The blood spraying everywhere reminds of the movie, "Shogun Assassin. And you know what? I might as well get this over with right now becuase somebody is just bound to comment on what it reminds him/her of:

"Fatalityyyy!"
Spyware
Posts: 383/720
You showed me this earlier.

I think its one of thee coolest pictures i've seen posted here yet. Its just awesome, Lore ripping some dudes head off.

Doesn't get any better

That and its drawn well(to me at least)
Lore Maxxum
Posts: 23/29
Ok. Im gona make a new thread for this, cause i want to make sure no one sees it unless they want to.

I sis this today in about 10 mins, cause a was really REALLY pissed. It helped me fell a little better.

!!WARNING!!

This picture contains gore!

Ok, here you all go.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v292/Lore-MX/Maul.jpg

I plan to finish this. Let me know what you think.
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