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[quote=Modest Revo]The first pic is pretty nice, and gives a feeling of modest minimalism.

Your second one is rather decent, though the flesh from the abdomen down seems to lose all of it's muscle contractions and flow of proportion. There's no musular chisels on the legs to dignify if it's a brash muscular tight-pants, or there are no wrinkles in it at all to dignify if it's just regular pants.

I see some attempts at trying to shade the second picture, however that's usually just you using gradients, which is really, really repulsive when used with anime styles. The minute muscular chisels on the body are pretty decently defined and bolded a bit more, but you could of added some shading to give that real flare into it.

Your fourth one is just rather blurry and messy, though I know you tried to give a fiery feeling to it, it's just not working out with all of these minute brush strokes that don't look crispe.

I feel the need to say something encouraging and appealing about your work, since I have a slight problem of being too harsh with my critiques; so nice work. [/quote]

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Nataku Sherineui Posts: 12/49	THANK YOU! finally, some CREATIVE criticism! that's what i wanted... it's nice to hear what people REALLY think. i agree with a lot of what you said... and i'll work harder to incorperate it into future drawings... once again, thanks !
Modest Revo Posts: 22/44	The first pic is pretty nice, and gives a feeling of modest minimalism. Your second one is rather decent, though the flesh from the abdomen down seems to lose all of it's muscle contractions and flow of proportion. There's no musular chisels on the legs to dignify if it's a brash muscular tight-pants, or there are no wrinkles in it at all to dignify if it's just regular pants. I see some attempts at trying to shade the second picture, however that's usually just you using gradients, which is really, really repulsive when used with anime styles. The minute muscular chisels on the body are pretty decently defined and bolded a bit more, but you could of added some shading to give that real flare into it. Your fourth one is just rather blurry and messy, though I know you tried to give a fiery feeling to it, it's just not working out with all of these minute brush strokes that don't look crispe. I feel the need to say something encouraging and appealing about your work, since I have a slight problem of being too harsh with my critiques; so nice work.
Nataku Sherineui Posts: 11/49	i don't know WHY i'm posting this... it's not like i'll get a ton of comments or any CREATIVE criticism... but yeah... i get bored. so, for all of you who wish to say "oh... ah... that's nice..." at my art and then forget i exist, here. http://www.deviantart.com/view/20945473/ http://www.deviantart.com/view/20894717/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20498257/ http://www.deviantart.com/view/19897136/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/19577049/ http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/20015528/ oh, yeah... and if i catch ANYONE using my art without permission, you'll have hell to pay. if you want to use anything in your profile, on another site, whatever, etc. just ASK ME! also, i'm taking requests for a short time. if you really want something drawn, ask me. AIM: Xiki Seite e-mail: meganrv@sbcglobal.net or private message me.

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