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Jakob98
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Nice poem
Elara
Posts: 5875/9717
Simple, yet good. I especially like the beginning. The line about the attacks seems a bit long and deracts a bit from the flow, but that is the only real criticism I can make.
True Flight
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Heavy,
Boots are so heavy,
Not as heavy as my shoulders,
Exhausting,
Carrying the world on my shoulders,
I want to cry when I see their faces,
They are so happy,
They suffer so much,
We give and give,
Yet it seems nothing has helped stop the attacks,
Scared,
The alarm sounds and I hide under concrete,
What will happen next?
I can't see,
Nothing,
Nothing heard,
No explosion.
Hot,
Just like every day,
Walking to work in the heat,
In my heavy boots.
Xeogaming Forums - Muses' Sanctuary - A Small Poem



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