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True Flight The One          Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| Let me explain something. Yes we are LEAVING Iraq. However everyone is headed for Afghanistan with in the next year. Including reserves and national guard. I can understand reserves, but I believe that we are misusing our national guard. NG is supposed to be used for the United States.
However the down side is that we only have like 1 infantry unit in the reserves. O.o So most NG units that leave are infantry. Look if it is so damn hard to get into active duty because there are way too many people in it. Why the hell are we sending reserves and NG? So this boils down to one more thing. Who decides when to send units? The pentagon.... Who runs the military? The president. AND ONE MORE THING. It's not free health care. It's a law stating that we have to HAVE health care. SO we're paying for health care that we can't afford anyway. Oh and the bullshit about borderline protection. Wonderful idea... too bad we still have to listen to people rant about how these laws are racist. Can you believe that there are people out there who think that President Obama pays their welfare checks? WTF. Some people need to stfu and get a freakin job. I pay for their welfare checks dammit. |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| in response to my husband's MMO conversation about getting a new pet.
[11:43:06 PM] Sarah Conklin: so eric you think it's okay to find another pet and just toss the old one away like it was a peice of garbage? cause if so you really have no place in this conversation back off now. I may not like the fact that it's a level below you, but the pet has been with you for about 20 levels and it should have some sort of sentimental value. |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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So you think it's okay to post with a layout that has batman on it? cause if so you have no place in this conversation and can back off now. I mean I do not agree with the fact that batman is a pedophile and has a complete crush on his little Robins, but I guess he's just trying to get away with it. How can you be against that?
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| So you think it's okay to support people who fit into the mold of terrorists? cause if so you have no place in this conversation and can back off now. I may not agree with the fact that they like to blow things up and walk away from them, but they have a place in society too. How can you be against that? | |||
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| lol I'm going to be doing the same thing to my parents when I get home. They are convinced I will be here til January. =P I'm coming back in December and won't be showing up to the fam until Christmas Eve. ANYWAY I am ordering a little santa claus outfit for the event. Something more girly though =P | |||
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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 Epic right thar. |
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| that was during R and R
the person below me has christmas lights on their cieling inside |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| Grammar: 8
It was good enough for a high school student but, there was a couple of things my English teacher and CO get on to me about. When you spoke about who Tyler was attacking, who was it? Almost all your sentences had a "he" or "it" in it instead of the poor saps name. His name was uuuuuh.... Jason? Spelling: 10 Plot: 5 I'm not a big fan of the fact that the story was too fast from one scene to the next. It's really cool that you took on the idea of a cannibal in a corporate life. I could see a beginning, a climax (even though it wasn't that big), and an end. Characters: 7 It's not hard to make a one dimensional character (unless that character is a part of a huge novel. Try making a character not change for 300+ pages.). I do agree with clockworkz though. The whole idea of sex to Tyler shouldn't have been mentioned. If Tyler truly is a cold, hardcore psychopath, he would've not mentioned sex. Description: 9 Now I'm going to disagree with Xeios about the fact that Jason was a temp and lived in a dump. To be honest that's about right about temps, I've worked for one. The pay's low and what not. However the dog I do agree with. I really wanted to know if it wore a specific collar, if it was big or tiny, and what breed the dog was. Keep up the good work. =P Creativity: 8 Seriously? Killing someone naked? That's AWESOME. You are lacking in some of the areas. As far as Trisha goes... Why was she on the list? What race was she? And what's this about not being a picky eater? Tyler was putting out descriptions in people and what he liked about them and what he didn't. That's not picky? Well... I guess the fact that Tyler ate the person none the less was why he isn't picky. Overall: 47 |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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I see what you are trying to do, Douglas Coupland wrote the same way at points. So it's good gramer. Spelling: 10 No errors Plot: 8 There was a beginning, a satisfying climax, and an end. Characters: 7 I can see how the characters are. I love how you put the accepting angel infront of the chaotic demon. Description: 9 You did exceptionally well making it seem like I was there. Creativity: 2 Sadly, this reminds me of Dead Man Walking. One of the stars in that movie was Sean Penn. See where I'm going? The prisoner was even visited by a Sister. Yes I know it's a common thing. This is pretty much the end of the movie. Over all: 44 |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| I have begun judging and I will finish by saturday =P
Sorry I have been in and out. We are going through hell because of this change of command and the phasing into Operation New Dawn. |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| Wright looked at Ace. He would know something about what she was talking about. "Do you want to take watch shifts sir?" Wright asked. Wright felt like she knew what dangers would be lurking around the corner if they stayed awake. "That way we can have a good system going. I say... five hour long shifts." | |||
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| ahem... I'm like germany. Americans never get a perfect ten. =P | |||
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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I did see somethings a little off. (Had my XO help me out a bit) Spelling: 10 Excellent Plot: 9 The beginning was very unimaginative to me. However it did bring everything together on the climax. I loved the comedy in the climax and to end it with such sadness. I almost cried. (at work too) Characters: 9 Mr. Berger was a great character. I've always loved the reapers in stories. Description: 10 All these descriptions make it so easy to be there. I felt like I was literally in the room. Creativity: 10 I love how you twisted the story of the Grim Reaper around and got this. This is just awesome =P Overall: 53 (Last edited by True Flight on 08-28-10 05:00 PM) |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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Several run ons and fragments. This made the story sound more like a monologue used for a drama class than a story. Spelling: 10 Plot: 9 I saw a beginning and a good explanation and a beautiful climax. The scenes were phased in and out wonderfully. Characters: 5 2 points because the characters just seem so cliche. Most of the post apocalyptic stories I have come across in high school had these two characters in it. However I will give you 3 extra points for the fact that the guy lives instead of the woman. lol Description: 8 There needs to be a bit more details to connect everything together. You did a great job describing the lifeless bodies and what not though. Creativity: 7 5 points for using technology instead of something else like zombies or the actual rapture. 2 points for the fact the guy lives. (Damn you high school lesbians.) Overall: 44 |
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| These are totally epic
and here is the song |
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| well.... she should know short shorts and tank tops are very provocative XD | |||
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| Wright sighed and nodded. She felt Frankie's hate towards everyone a lot. "mawlud..." She said to him. Wright's thoughts began to drift away to why she knew that word in fact. There were a lot of words she knew. She looked at Victoria. Why do I get the feeling that we're actually dead and she's showing out way to Hell? She thought. Wright remembered many stories she read about places like these. They were paradises on the outside then again... They were dead and all had gone to hell.
Wright looked towards Frankie. He disgusted her sometimes. However, she never gave him the benefit of the doubt. Wright looked at Ace. "So Ace... What type of helicopters did you fly? Chanooks? Blackhawks?" |
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| sorry I went back over it. My XO said I was right there were things but not run on sentences. Some of things were about the larger sentences and the name change (i.e. wrong proper noun) | |||
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True Flight The One Since: 08-21-04 Since last post: 2684 days Last activity: 2669 days |
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| You have just pissed me off Topos.
I serve in the military. There is nothing heartless about a deployment. You should see what they have done to our people and we still treat our EPWs (Enemy Prisoners of War, for your ignorant ass) as civillians. In fact they get way better treatment than us. You have no right to speak this about the military. No right at all. You've never been to Iraq or Afghanistan. Have you seen what they video tape? IED attacks, suicide bombings, beheadings of Americans and American Soldiers, and sniper shots. These people have no respect for their own kind. We have had mortar attacks in the International Zone many times during the elections. We even had a suicide bomber there as well. Attacking his own people to scare them away from the polling zones. You honestly don't understand. During these attacks, we have gathered out dead and wounded and made sure that we bring EVERYONE home. Do you even watch the news about Afghan? We capture our wounded terrorist and treat them for their injuries ignoring the fact that they have killed our fellow brethren. Oh wait you probably just watch that CNN bullshit that bad mouths the military all the fucking time. Do you even understand that Operation Iraqi Freedom is phasing into Operation New Dawn? Let me break it down for you. We are stopping all combat here in Iraq. Before you make a comment on the military and how we're Nazis. Take a minute and figure out the news. Don't ever EVER assume the fact that we're heartless people. We all have a job to do out here. Our instincts say to lock and load and fire at people who are attacking us while we are helping these nations out. Pay fucking attention. Edit: Oh by the fucking way You as a civillian should know that the religious bigots are burning Korans and denying freedom of religion to the muslims as well in New York. I mean yeah it's a mosque a couple blocks from Ground Zero and people are slashing taxi cab drivers throats because they are muslim. SO don't just single out American Soldiers. While I was here and hearing about all this, I have found out that we are more human than the religious bigots that make civilians look bad. Edit 2: AND THAT ARTICLE WAS 2004. YOU'VE GOTTA COME UP WITH MORE MODERN MATERIAL THAN THAT SHIT. Those soldiers involved have been properly taken care of per Army rules... OMG you have made me so pissed I want a cigarette!!! Edit 3: BTW You're a fucking jack ass who gets a high off of bad mouthing everything. I'm sick of people like you who make these claims about the military. It makes me sick to know that I have to defend your ass when the shit goes down. Edit 4: Let me break it down for you since you may be one of those guys that only nitpicks parts and pieces of a post. Here's what you are: 
And you're douchbaggery is at DEF-CON 5 If I ever find out your address I'll send you a used one so you get a hands on appearance you fucking jack ass. (Last edited by True Flight on 08-28-10 06:35 PM) |
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