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Rogue If you're reading this... You are the Resistance         Since: 08-17-04 Since last post: 422 days Last activity: 231 days |
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| He clutched her, her face drenched from his salty tears and sweat.
She was dying. Oh heavens, was she dying. He cradled her, pressing his lips to the nape of her neck as her head hung limply again. No doctor or surgeon could save her. She'd been ravaged by the Disease. Unbeknownst to the sweet, star-crossed lovers, Tristan was a carrier of the rare, yet ultimately fatal infection. Though he called for emergency transport, they knew it would never get there in time and even if they did there wasn't anything that could be done. Her usual rosy cheeks, pale. Her breathing labored at one moment, shallow the next. He shook his beloved. "Don't die on me now! Felicia, wake up! Felicia?" Her almond-brown eyes, unfocused, trailed from the ceiling to his face. Emotions exploded forth. "Trist," her voice weak, barely over a husky whisper. "The Dis--" "I know," he murmured. For all he tried, Tristan couldn't show any restraint to his weeping. He was ashamed that he couldn't be a man for her, that he couldn't find it in his soul to be strong. He hated himself. With a shaking hand, Felicia reached up, combing her fingers through his dark hair, stroking his ear, smiling as warmly as she could muster. In that moment, Tristan's tears stopped. He bent down to graze his lips over hers. Seconds later, she was gone. ------------------------------- This is actually the first of many parts to come. I know what's going to happen in the next few parts. No, I don't have an end. And yes, I'm aware that the beginning is painfully cheesy. I seriously just wrote it right now and the story has several kinks that are going to need to be worked out. EDIT: Had to fix a typo. (Last edited by Rogue on 09-18-07 06:27 PM) |
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WhiteRose Warrior Sailor Delerium Have you ever spent days and days and days making up flavors of ice cream that no ones ever eaten before? Like chicken and telephone ice cream?...Green mouse ice cream was the worst.  Since: 08-17-04 From: The Dreaming Since last post: 4240 days Last activity: 4944 days |
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| Wow, I don't think I've ever read anything fictional by you, but this is really nice. My eyes actually teared up as I read this. I can't wait to see what else you put up. | |||
Elara Divine Mamkute Dark Elf Goddess Chaos Imp Penguins Fan Ms. Invisable  Since: 08-15-04 From: Ferelden Since last post: 100 days Last activity: 100 days |
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| Oooh, little nugget of coolness. Cheesy coolness for now, but coolness. The "Disease"? Scary. |
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