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| Rauni Posts: 769/1351 |
Clockworkz, I hope you don't mind a little improvement advice but if you don't want to read it, don't highlight the spoiler.
Spoiler:
The racoon side seem to have longer arms and seem like she could strech out to touch the wolf face... The details is very specific and well-told. However, the wolf's (Hey, I am going by what Zabuza said.) arm seem like it can out-mass the size of the body which seem like it was drawn in a wrong prosition. Also, the racoon face is very fine but the wolf face seem missing in a way, the way it joined at the neck seem a bit screwy. Oh, it may not be a important part but try to sperate finger because sometime, it can look like you are separating one part of the finger (the racoon touching the wolf's face) and then later merging together, which isn't really natural. I don't mean to be bluntly but this is how I see some weird part in the picture. Overall, the detail of the post is very highly specific and somewhat emotional (hey, just drawing between the two lovers isn't going to make me feel very emotion.) since I don't get the whole full history between those two... That and something I believes it would similar to familiar relationship that most story or video games would start off. (Sorry, Fire Emblem 4 ruined it.) |
| Stitch Posts: 1165/2785 |
The drawing I paid, had commissioned by Clocky, to draw:
A variation on his original with furries: Wolfy & 'Coon |
| Elara Posts: 2837/9734 |
You did Zabuza? I want to see that.
But yeah, I gotta agree with everyone else, you've gotten a lot better. Telling us the backstory I think allows us to enjoy it more and understand where you are coming from... and those eyes, they're just gorgeous! |
| Stitch Posts: 1156/2785 |
It's getting there. I did commission a piece of artwork variation on this piece from him...paid...and it turned out well despite a few anatomy flaws. But, I would pay again for something possibly better. Good job. |
| Katana Posts: 913/3649 |
Like Xeo said, you've definitely improved. I think your work was always kickass, and is still just as good as the others when you take them as they are. However, I'm seeing more in your work and it's all really good.
Also, as Zabuza said...I'm in love with the eyes. Drawing eyes are difficult enough...but caputing emotion...amazing. |
| Xeoman Posts: 3280/11751 |
As with your other recent works I've seen, this looks just as good. Really Clock your work has really improved, at least I don't remember your old stuff being like this. 
Awesome though. Great sketching and everything. |
| Bitmap Posts: 1682/7838 |
You showed me this and my heart just felt sour after looking at it...
I too enjoy the sketchy look of the drawing...Once again, it looks great |
| Stitch Posts: 1127/2785 |
I said it before, and I'll say it again...it's good.
I like your artistic style in sketch drawing. Sorry, I'm distracted by horrible sounding music played by little kids. Anyway, I like the detail, and it doesn't really need much to convey the emotion. Much like I can capture people in writing, you've been able to capture emotion just in their eyes. Truly amazing. My eyes usually look glazed over and zoning out. Guess it comes from me being glazed over and zoning out occasionally. |
| The Accidental Protege Posts: 1241/2641 |
Very rarely does my own artwork make me cry tears of depression due to the content of the pic.
In fact, this is the first time I actually got emotional over my own drawings, and for good reason. Here's the story: Michael (Ampharos Morph) and Nikki (Espeon Morph), lovers, in the midst of a Rocket Camp infiltration with the rest of their rag-tag team. Michael makes it out alive, but Nikki isn't as lucky... She gets shot full of holes, and dies in Michael's arms. Lyrics by Pearl Jam. I just had to manifest my incurable depression into a picture. v.v |
